Question

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

Birds outside at the feeder such as cardinals, finches, and chickadees keep the cat entertained at the window for hours.

Answer 1

A.
Birds outside at the feeder: such as cardinals; finches; and chickadees, keep the cat entertained at the window for hours.

B.
Birds outside at the feeder—such as cardinals, finches, and chickadees—keep the cat entertained at the window for hours.

C.
Birds outside at the feeder, such as cardinals, finches, and chickadees—keep the cat entertained at the window for hours.

Answer 2

C. is the most likely answer

Answer 3

ok can u help with a couple more

Answer 4

sure as many as you want

Answer 5

ok

Answer 6

is my answer correct @sapphire13

Answer 7

ok can u help with a couple more

Answer 8

yes sure

Answer 9

ooops typed it again

Answer 10

thats fine

Answer 11

i dont know if its right i have to submit it first

Answer 12

Which sentence uses dashes correctly?

A.
"I would not step there if I were—!" she began as I slipped on the wet floor.

B.
Several birds stayed at the feeder—hoping for a good meal.

C.
My sister—a big fan of the outdoors—walks two miles—every afternoon.

D.
Turquoise beads and—a silver medallion—adorn her favorite necklace.

Answer 13

A. is the correct answer

Answer 14

ok i was thinking that answer was right

Answer 15

k do u want more help or is that all?

Answer 16

little more help

Answer 17

Which sentence uses dashes correctly?

A.
Open the windows—to let the breeze in—and the paint will dry fast.

B.
We will use the same color for the bookcase—light green—that we used on the door and window frames.

C.
I intend to—paint that bookcase tomorrow—help me remove all the books.

D.
Yard work—for example, raking leaves and planting shrubs—fills many of our autumn weekends.

Answer 18

B. is right i think

Answer 19

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

There are certain things about winter for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall that I always enjoy.

A.
There are certain things about winter: for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall that I always enjoy.

B.
There are certain things about winter—for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall—that I always enjoy.

C.
There are certain things about winter: for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall—that I always enjoy.

Answer 20

but not sure

Answer 21

ok

Answer 22

i think i can help with this one

Answer 23

the other one i wasnt sure about lol

Answer 24

:)

Answer 25

A. is the answer :)

Answer 26

is there more i have to leave in a sec sorry

Answer 27

oh theres 3 more but if u have to go its ok

Answer 28

i can do more

Answer 29

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

The youngest campers ages 3–5 will listen to a story between lunchtime and naptime.

A.
The youngest campers ages 3–5 will listen to a story between lunchtime (and naptime.)

B.
The youngest campers (ages 3–5) will listen to a story between lunchtime and naptime.

C.
The youngest campers ages 3–5 will listen to a story between lunchtime (and naptime).

Answer 30

just a sec give me ten mins

Answer 31

kk

Answer 32

i think the one i just posted is B

Answer 33

you are correct the answer is B.

Answer 34

ok

Answer 35

r u there

Answer 36

so is there another question

Answer 37

hello?

Answer 38

hello do u need help anymore?