I was wondering if you guys think this is a good poem.

I wrote it in study hall (where I can't get up or talk) and I saw two birds flying over the trees here it is:

The Wish to Be Free

Out the window I look, Free
Free are the birds, Wish
Wish I do, to be free like them

Question

I was wondering if you guys think this is a good poem.

I wrote it in study hall (where I can't get up or talk) and I saw two birds flying over the trees here it is:

The Wish to Be Free

Out the window I look, Free
Free are the birds, Wish
Wish I do, to be free like them

anonymous · Answer

I don't know if its good or not but it's not really that important I was just wondering...

lena772 · Answer

It's a good start...

anonymous · Answer

Like Lena said. It's a good start. I like where you were going with it. 
If you ever need any other advice there's this great site you can go on.
www.allpoetry.com
I'm on there and use it almost daily. Make you an account and get started. The best thing about poetry is to have fun. 

Oh yeah, my screen name is charitybugg
I look forward to seeing you on there some day. :3