So, I write these short stories and was wondering if any of them are any good. I think one day I'd like to publish them.
Here's a link to one of them. :3
http://allpoetry.com/story/11198923-Hop-and-the-Mango.-Chapter-one-by-CharityBugg

There"s more to the story. So tell me what ya think. :3

(No rude comments please. :) )

Question

So, I write these short stories and was wondering if any of them are any good. I think one day I'd like to publish them. 
Here's a link to one of them. :3
http://allpoetry.com/story/11198923-Hop-and-the-Mango.-Chapter-one-by-CharityBugg

There"s more to the story. So tell me what ya think. :3

(No rude comments please. :) )

anonymous · Answer

Love it! ;)

anonymous · Answer

It's really good! You should definitely publish them one day(:

anonymous · Answer

its really good has a few glitches that could be tweeked and then A+

anonymous · Answer

Thanks everyone. I appreciate your comments . :)