Question

i need some help with lyrics for a song i'm writing.

Answer 1

you're sittin alone in your room wonderin what went wrong,
knowin that he never loved at all
so now you're cryin all alone wonderin what now.
don't lose hope, cause you should know that you're never alone,
i'll be here if you want me, just let me in.
please cause i want to help.
i'm sorry i wasn't there before but i'm here for you now.

Answer 2

That's great what about it is wrong?

Answer 3

i don't know if i should add more, and if i did i'm not sure what to add.

Answer 4

for your love for your love at your feet I will bow
I would do anything just to never see you frown

Answer 5

I'll treat you like a princess all you need is a crown

Answer 6

my heart breaks as you cry
wondering if you're to make it by
loving you to feel alright
i make it better with all my might.
thanks :)

Answer 7

No problem ^^

Answer 8

Funny how people from two totally different genres can work together well

Answer 9

do you sing?

Answer 10

i'm in my school choir.

Answer 11

well can you sing solo well?

Answer 12

i don't sing in front of people much, but i do sing by myself.

Answer 13

How'd you like to join my band? Or at least have a tryout

Answer 14

where do you live? i'd like to.

Answer 15

We're an online project, an international band.

Answer 16

what's your band called?? and where do i go for it?

Answer 17

We're a death metal/deathcore band and we're looking for a singer, we have 2 guitarists 1 of which makes drum tracks on his computer and I scream.

Answer 18

we interact via Skype

Answer 19

i'm sorry i don't have skype. :(

Answer 20

FaceTime works too

Answer 21

don't have that either :(

Answer 22

heres our logo

Answer 23

google plus hangouts?

Answer 24

no i don't have that.

Answer 25

no way you have a band

Answer 26

Yes I do.

Answer 27

cool i am the lead singer in my youth band at our church

Answer 28

ok

Answer 29

my voice is really bad when it is recorded, an i'm kinda insecurce about it cause i've been told it sounds boyish.

Answer 30

thats fine, we need something to counteract the harshness a bit

Answer 31

ad google plus hangouts is easy to get just make an account online and you have it, no download

Answer 32

i don't have that kind of phone that has a camera.

Answer 33

heres a band cover by us

Answer 34

it's really intresting, but my voice doesn't really scream, i'm an alto and my voice isn't that great.

Answer 35

we need a singer haha, I scream.

Answer 36

i'm not sure i'd be the one, i mostly write lyrics, not so much as sing them, vocally i'm soft and light when i sing.

Answer 37

Ok, thanks for the honesty, if you ever feel like you wanna try out though don't hesitate to message me.

Answer 38

ok,