i wrote this one

sitting alone in a dark room seeing nothing in front of me, hearing nothing but the tears falling from my face and the shattering of the broken remains of my heart. Tasting the bittersweet concoction of sadness and anger boiled in a cauldron of time, leaving only a seething black mass of searing hate and tart angiush. "why?" I ask to no one at all "why? what was the reason for him to tempt me, barely giving me a taste of sweet freedom and love, only to take those feelings i gave and burn them, tearing the last bit of humanity i had to shreads ruining whatever chance i had o

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i wrote this one

sitting alone in a dark room seeing nothing in front of me, hearing nothing but the tears falling from my face and the shattering of the broken remains of my heart. Tasting the bittersweet concoction of sadness and anger boiled in a cauldron of time, leaving only a seething black mass of searing hate and tart angiush. "why?" I ask to no one at all "why? what was the reason for him to tempt me, barely giving me a taste of sweet freedom and love, only to take those feelings i gave and burn them, tearing the last bit of humanity i had to shreads ruining whatever chance i had o

anonymous · Answer

of being happy and content ever again. @Ummah.Naja

anonymous · Answer

@Ummah.Naja

anonymous · Answer

You have some good stuff @scarymary101

anonymous · Answer

I am actually a very well known Spoken word poet in Orlando. Bet you didn't know that :)

anonymous · Answer

You should try out for your districts poetry team so you can compete in nationals with me

beccaboo333 · Answer

It's really good Mary :) try posting in the Writing section too for a lot more feedback.