Question

i need help with my poem

Answer 1

ok

Answer 2

i need to feature at least two instances of strong imagery

and my poem is ;


sometimes we fight with all our might
like soldiers with a plight
and doors are seemed to close
Closed like blinds in a window pane.
But in the end, friends again
And that’s what counts the most
Through thick and thin, tested by time
Our friendship will never die
We might grow old, all secrets might get told
But we’ll be here, as time goes by.
You know me best, my flaws and all.
And my friend that's why,
If you were to die, so would I.

Answer 3

ok so do you no what strong imagery is

Answer 4

Try to be more descriptive when it comes to death.

Answer 5

yeah i know what strong imagery is , its just i dont know how to incorporate it in my poem.

Answer 6

You could be gruesome about death? You could talk about how the time flying. ?

Answer 7

well between me and superman here will get you where you need to be

Answer 8

:D

Answer 9

.
sometimes we fight with all our might like soldiers with a plight and doors are seemed to close Closed like blinds in a window pane. But in the end, friends again And that’s what counts the most Through thick and thin, tested by time Our friendship will never die We might grow old, all secrets might get told But we’ll be here, as time goes by. You know me best, my flaws and all. And my friend that's why,I only have my memories now,
A frozen piece of time,
To remind me of how it was,
When you were here, and mine. so if you were to die on this this beautiful stary night you wouldnt be by yourslef.





not meaning to re write your poem but it would be something like that.

Answer 10

thank you soo much!

Answer 11

no problem it wasnt the best example but it should work

Answer 12

@kayceejones1 Wow, I really like that. @Kaylaaa I liked the original too. ^_^

Answer 13

thanks but all i did was a a sentence to hers i like hers to but she wanted more imagery

Answer 14

I like it all. ^_^

Answer 15

same here