Question

I need help writing a haiku poem.
it needs to follow the 5-7-5 rule

this is what I have...
outside in the snow
children play all day
joy is seen on faces

is it any good?

Answer 1

I think what you have right now is a good start.
But the second line only have 5 syllables.

Answer 2

ok thanks.. i'm not sure what to add tho

Answer 3

outside in the snow
you see children play all day
their face filled with joy

5-7-5

Answer 4

Yes, that is better.

Answer 5

thanks for the help :)

Answer 6

You're welcome :).