Question

He told me last night,
Nothing ever feels the same.
I saw the look in his eyes,
He said, “None of us are to blame.”

He could see the pain in my face,
But I don’t want him to be sad, oh no.
This love was never meant to be,
My heart begins to beat real slow.

He says that he sorry,
I tell him I’ve felt the same way.
He didn’t want to end like this,
But those words don’t mellow the pain.

So I get up,
And start to walk along.
There’s no more us, just my luck,
So now I’m gone, gone, gone.

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Answer 3

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Answer 4

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Answer 5

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Answer 6

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Answer 7

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