please write a arrival report in short?

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anonymous · Answer

Your question is too open ended to provide an answer. 

You need to give this topic some thought first, then write a draft or at least think about what you want to say, and finally we can help you improve it.

raheelafzaal · Answer

is it correct: 
subject : arrival report 

in complaint of G-3 engineering,lahore order no. 12547.
i sumites my arrival eport o 23.2.14 
your obediently
raheel

raheelafzaal · Answer

* i submit

raheelafzaal · Answer

is it correct 

subject : arrival report 

in complaint of G-3 engineering,lahore order no. 12547.
i sumites my arrival report o 23.2.14 
your obediently
raheel

anonymous · Answer

what's the lesson called/objectives?

raheelafzaal · Answer

i want to tell in this letter that according order i have joined the comapny

anonymous · Answer

alright. from what you have so far it looks like your sending something? a product? if you were writing a letter that youve joined the company ... i think you would want to write it more like a buisness letter. it sounds like you're writing an order form XD i don't know if thats the objective http://www.weidert.com/Portals/65360/images/Screen%20shot%202011-10-28%20at%2012.50.27%20PM.png ^^^ example.

anonymous · Answer

dang