I know this is supposed to be in writing, but I really want some feedback on the first chapter of the book I'm writing. If there's something I should improve, please tell me. I really appreciate it. Thank you. (:

http://www.wattpad.com/41711915-untitled

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I know this is supposed to be in writing, but I really want some feedback on the first chapter of the book I'm writing. If there's something I should improve, please tell me. I really appreciate it. Thank you. (:

http://www.wattpad.com/41711915-untitled

anonymous · Answer

Its pretty good i like it

kmullis6 · Answer

thanks so much! @Gad

anonymous · Answer

Your welcome if you keep up the good job you might be an award wining writer

kmullis6 · Answer

Haha i doubt that lol but it really means a lot (:

kmullis6 · Answer

@Gad

anonymous · Answer

Why doubt it if you try hard enough and if that's what you want to do it can happen