Need help with the Thesis. doing an analytic paper.
Intro: In the play Romeo and Juliet, demonstrates how two lovers from a feuding family who marries eachother. However, because of the family hatred of eachother, they erupt making them to do impulsive decisions.
Thesis :Our protagonist Juliet comes to a point in the play where she is clustered with thoughts for the sake of love. In Act IV Juliet’s love for Romeo led her to do impulsive actions between the Friar and herself.In Act IV, Juliet’s love for Romeo led her to do impulsive actions between the Friar and herself.

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Need help with the Thesis. doing an analytic paper. 
Intro: In the play Romeo and Juliet, demonstrates how two lovers from a feuding family who marries eachother. However, because of the family hatred of eachother, they erupt making them to do impulsive decisions. 
Thesis :Our protagonist Juliet comes to a point in the play where she is clustered with thoughts for the sake of love. In Act IV Juliet’s love for Romeo led her to do impulsive actions between the Friar and herself.In Act IV,  Juliet’s love for Romeo led her to do impulsive actions between the Friar and herself.

wwhitlock · Answer

Seems like a long thesis.