Question

I need ideas for a story that im writing based on the Fifty Shades of Grey Series and I have no clue how to end it.

Answer 1

I freaking loved those books. I'm almost finished with the third one. But they're great. I don't know how yours is written so I can't exactly say how it should end.

Answer 2

Ana Steele is a 21 year old girl in college for her senior year. She was a shy girl, she was also very loving and so serious in school. She has long brown hair, so long it’s to the middle of her back if it’s down. She has the most beautiful eyes ever, they are a baby blue color. Ana has never been in love her entire life, she hasn’t even thought about having a relationship with anyone. She is still a virgin,and so far plans to stay that way for a while. Ana has a job at a small hardware store called Carson’s. She lives with her roommate,Kate, in a small apartment in Seattle. Kate owns the apartment that she and Ana share. She hasn’t seen her real dad since she was a little kid. She has always classified Ray as her father even though he is only her step dad that her mom divorced. Out of the many she chose to live with him until she moved out on her 18th birthday.
William Lovett is a tall ,muscular ,and a very young man at the age of 26. He has the most gorgeous dirty blonde hair. William has the most beautiful dark brown eyes. You could seriously get lost in a dream staring into his eyes. He has never been in love; however, he has had many relationships, but he has never actually loved any of these girls. He is not the biggest romance freak. He is most definitely not a virgin, he has had sex more than one time ,and it was not with the same girl. William is filthy rich because he is the CEO of his company. Since he is rich he owns a huge apartment in Seattle with his butler, Taylor. He also lives with his cook, Mrs. Jones. William may look like an amazing guy at heart and that there is nothing wrong with him ,but in reality he has had a terrible past. He doesn’t want to discuss this with anyone until he meets the girl for him.
I, Ana, am so pleased to tell you the fascinating story of my life that is still going on today. My roommate, Kate, was sick ,and she had planned an interview with the wonderful Mr. Lovett. So she had asked me to go in the place of her since she was sick. Me being me I agreed because it was so hard for her to get the interview. I drove a total of two and a half hours to do this interview for Mrs. News reporter Kate. When I showed up at his office, I had to tell the receptionist that I had arrived for a meeting with Mr. Lovett. I got told to take a seat in the waiting area and he would be right down to get me. When I first saw this man he was Oh My God drop dead gorgeous. With his dirty blonde hair and his dark brown eyes. As we walk towards the elevator I stumble because I am wearing heels. When we arrive to the 27th Floor of his Enterprise Company, we are walking to the door of his office and I stumble again.
He asks “Are you ok miss?”
I am too shocked that he called me miss to ever answer him and I just stand there. I feel so stupid because I just stand there like a complete idiot. All I can think is how beautiful he is. When I start to ask him questions I am super grateful that Kate took the time to write out questions because if she hadn't I would have no idea at all what to ask him. As I begin I set up the recorder and I am very nervous.
“I am Ana and I am here on Kate’s behalf due to the fact that she is sick” I began.
“Well Miss Ana it is my pleasure for you to come and interview me for your sick friend. Shall we begin?” Mr.Lovett replied
“Well, these are still Kate’s question. How were you treated as a kid?” I questioned
“ Ana, dear I don’t feel comfortable telling you how I was treated as a kid.” he states angry.
“ I am very sorry Sir, these again are not my questions to really be asking and I wasn't really ready to come and do this for Kate it was last minute so I don't have my
own questions.” I say back sad.
At this time I have only been here for about thirty minutes and I have already
offended him and I think that I should just leave ,but I don’t because I have many more questions for him for Kate’s paper.
“Please Ana call me William or Mr.Lovett but never sir.” William says
“Well, William here we go again. How many family members do you have? What do they all do?” I ask
“Well Ana if you must know I have My step-parents, my brother,and I have my sister. My parents name’s are Mr. and Mrs. Lovett. My dad thinks he raised his kids right ,but I think otherwise. My Brother, Elliott owns a company just like I do. He also likes to fix up houses on the weekdays that he is not in the office. He is a little younger than me at the age of 23. Now theres always the youngest of us all my sister, Mia, she is only at the age of 18, she is still in Highschool about to graduate in the next couple of weeks. That is pretty much it on my family.” he says this with a calm voice.
“Why thank you Mr.Lovett. I am very sorry I don't really know what to call you. Thanks again ,but I really should be going.” I say dramatically
All I am thinking at this point is that I need to get out of there before I tell him that he is drop dead gorgeous. As I am getting my things together he slides his card in my pocket as if to say that he wants to see me again. All I think is that I want to see you to ,but you are way older than me.
“Nice meeting you Ana. I am looking forward to seeing you again.” William states
“Goodbye William.” I state so sweetly
As I get ready to leave Mr.Lovett insist on helping me put my coat on even though I am very capable of doing it myself. I am very pleased with my interview ,and I hope that I received all information that Kate need to do her paper on the great Mr. William Lovett, CEO of his growing company. As I get into the elevator alone ,and here comes Mr. Lovett running, he get to the elevator just in time to stop the doors from shutting. All that I can think is that he didn’t want me to go.
I ask curiously “Did I do something?”
“Why would you think that Miss Steele?” he stated with curiosity.
“Well, you did run all the way from your office just to jump into an elevator with me.” I state with sass towards him.
“Well, if you must know Miss Steele I happened to follow you because I have a meeting downstairs in less than 5 minutes. I also wondered if I would ever see you again. So Miss Steele will I see you again?”
“No, Mr. Lovett I don’t think you will see me again. Oh, I did not know that you had another meeting right after mine, I have always thought that business people take breaks after each meeting.” I answer his random questions.
“Okay well, the end of our ride has came. I guess I won’t be seeing you.” he sadly says.
I say goodbye one last time and I am out the door in a flash. I have no idea how to react to the fact that he has asked me if he could see me again ,and me being stupid I turned him down. I feel really bad as I climb into my car I can’t help it but to stare at him as I walk out of the door. I’m so shocked that he wants to see me again. I mean come on what about me does he like so much. I’m not that interesting.
As I get into the car to head back to the apartment, I sit and stare at my very crappy phone ,and I also pull out the card that William gave me. I sit there not knowing if I should put his number in my phone ,or if I should just throw away the card. I decided to do neither ,and I hold on to the card for a little while because I’m sure Kate will want it, he is doing our graduation speech. I try to forget it ,and I start my long drive home.
I’m almost home and I am so tired I don’t even want to face Kate yet. Why couldn’t she just not be sick ,and she could of came to the interview herself. I wouldn’t of had to drive the last two and a half hours thinking about Mr. William Lovett. As I pull into the parking garage, I see José’s car ,and I get a sort of sock that he is here.
After I park the car I get out and I take off running to the apartment to find out that he had left already and took the long way around. I walk into my bedroom with my backpack that has Kate’s questions and recorder. Down the hall I hear Kate coming and all I think is oh I’m so not ready to tell her what happened.
Kate walks through the door saying “Ana, how did the meeting go? I’m sorry that you had to go by yourself and you didn’t get to stay home and study. Was Mr. Lovett nice?”
I respond to Kate’s questions “ The meeting was okay I guess. It probably would of been better if you would of went, but it’s okay I can study tomorrow. Yes, he was more than nice.”
“Do you have something that you need to tell me? What happened there today?” Kate say with slight anger in her tone.
“Kate, nothing happened he just happened to chase me to the elevator so he could be with me. He helped me put my coat back on me. I asked him questions and he answered them in a timely matter. He also gave me his card with his name,number, and the name of his company. He told me to call him anytime that I need to talk.” I respond to her scared.
“Ana you have to tell me about these things. Maybe you should've told him to back off a little because he is like way older than you, well not that much older ,but still. On the other hand maybe you should call him a schedule a date to go out and just talk to him ,and get to know him.” Kate say not worrying at all.
“Kate, let me handle my own battles okay? I mean if I decided to talk to him I will it really is none of your concern. Now if you don’t mind I must get ready for work.” I say with an attitude.
“Fine Ana do whatever the hell you want!” Kate answers very angry towards me.
After Kate and my discussion she storms out of my room and slams the door. I get I get up and I start to get ready for my shift at Carsons. I think to myself what would my life be like if I hadn’t moved in with Kate after high school. Maybe I should call William on my way to work or maybe after. I think I will wait.
As I arrive at work I am so tired after a long drive that I don’t even want to go. I get out of my piece of crap car, and I walk to the door. After I clock in I walk behind the counter and I am ringing people’s supplies up and all of a sudden I see Mr. William Lovett walk in and I freak out. All that I can think is why is he here, does he know I work here. Oh my God he is walking towards me.
“Miss Steele I came to see you.” he said very happy
How does he know I work here? “How did you know where to find me?”
“It doesn’t matter how I found out where you were all that matters is that I found you, and now I’m here so you must help me.” he said
“Well. Mr.Lovett what would you like help with?” I ask
“ Well, I was actually looking for some rope ,and some tape.” he says
I reply “Well, you can find the tape on aisle three and you can find the rope on aisle nine.”
“Very well Miss Steele. Thank you for your time.” He thanks me.
As he walks towards aisle three I sit back and think about what he said. He came to see me! I’m so happy. My face is as red as it will ever get. He’s coming back.
“I think I’m ready to check out Miss Steele. I think we should get together sometime to hang out.” he says quietly
“Well, Mr. Lovett I have way more important things to do than run around with a guy I only just met. If you would like we could text because Kate would like to get some photographs of you for her article in the paper that she is doing on you. So, how would tomorrow be?” I reply to him.
“Miss Steele, I would be grateful as to come do a photo shoot for your lovely friend Kate. Tomorrow would be lovely. Are you going to be there?” He questions me.
“Of course I will be there I go everywhere with Kate. I will text you as soon as I get home to ask Kate what she would like to do.” I answer him eager to go out on a date with him.
“Well, I look forward to hearing from you ,and seeing you tomorrow.” He says as he walks out of the store.
As soon as he is out the door ,and in the car with the man that he rode here with, I pull out my cell phone and send a quick text to Kate saying this *MR.LOVETT WOULD LIKE TO DO THE PHOTO SHOOT TOMORROW.*
I almost instantly get a reply to my text reading * THAT WOULD BE LOVELY!!! WHERE WOULD HE LIKE TO MEET AT?*
I reply to Kate as fast as possible without getting caught by my boss *NO HE DIDN’T GIVE ME A PLACE OR A TIME I HAVE TO TEXT HIM AND LET HIM KNOW.*
An instant reply from my best friend in the world *YOU HAVE HIS NUMBER!!! OMG ANA!! WHY DIDN’T YOU TELL ME.*
I answer her immediately *KATE I AM AT WORK WE WILL TALK WHEN I GET HOME.*
Before I get back to work I send William a quick message *HEY MR.LOVETT IT’S ANA HERE. I TALKED TO KATE AND SHE SAID THAT WE ARE ON FOR TOMORROW. WHERE WOULD YOU LIKE TO MEET AND WHAT TIME?*
All that I can think when my phone goes off is was he waiting on my text? He responds *HELLO, MISS STEELE GLAD TO HEAR FROM YOU AND GLAD TO HEAR THAT WE WILL MEET AGAIN TOMORROW. WE COULD MEET AT MY HOTEL CALL MR.LOVETT HOTEL @ LETS SAY 10A.M.*
I answer him as soon as he text me *MR.LOVETT I MUST GO I HAVE WORK TO DO. I WILL SEE YOU TOMORROW.*
As I get back to work all I can think about is tomorrow. I think what am I going to wear. What am I going to say to him. All I say to myself is that I must not think about this right now.
I am about to leave work, I clock out. I am in charge of closing up, so I lock the door and I walk out. I am walking towards my car ,and I climb in ,and I shoot Kate a message.
*HEY, IM GONNA STOP AND GET A COFFEE BEFORE I HEAD HOME WOULD YOU LIKE ANYTHING?*
She replys shortly after * UMM THANK YOU I WILL SEE YOU WHEN YOU GET HERE*
As I pull up at the coffee shop drive through, and I order two large lattes. I pull away and I head towards my apartment.
I park in the parking garage ,and I head up to Kate and my apartment. I hand Kate her latte. I walk slowly to my room and I study for my test and drink my latte.
The next morning, I don’t realize that I feel asleep until, I wake up with my latte spilled all over the floor and my textbook on the floor. I start to clean up my mess and then I glance over at the clock and I realize that it is 9 o’clock A.M. I stop cleaning and I run to the bathroom. I quickly undress as fast as possible and I jump in the shower. The hot water running down my body is sensational.
After I am out of the shower, I dry myself off. I start by putting on one of Kate’s dresses, it is short, and maroon. I put on high black pumps. I looked as good as I was gonna get considering I’m not the one getting pictures done, William is.
I walk out into the the hallway and down the hall to Kate’s room. I knock on the door. There was no answer. She was not in there, so I walk down to the living room. She was in there the whole time and she is ready to go with keys in hand.
As we arrive at the hotel in which Mr.Lovett chose. I walk over to the front desk and I ask them if they would happen to know where Mr.Lovett wants us to set up. The front desk says that he wants us in the penthouse suite and that he should already be up there.
I walk over to the elevator and as I climb in Mr.Lovett comes out and says, “Miss Steele, are you coming up for the photo shoot?”
“Why, yes I am certainly coming up for the photoshoot.” I state back.
“Very well Miss Steele, I will be right up I am just going for a cup of coffee. Maybe I can wait until after ,and then you can go with me?” He states back.
“We will have to see how late it is when we get done with this photo shoot. I would enjoy a cup of tea.” I say.
Looking at me with a weird glare he questions back “You don’t like coffee?”
I sadly say back “No, I have not liked tea since I was a teenager.”
“Well, Miss Steele you may drink tea. We better head up for this photo shoot.”
I walk into the elevator with Mr.Lovett right behind me. I can’t believe he is alone with me in an elevator again. As we step out of the elevator at the top, we walk into the penthouse ,and Kate, Jose ,and some other guy that William knows is there. They have the backdrop already set up ,and they were waiting for the two of us.
Mr.Lovett does as he is told by Kate and Jose for the photos. I mean Kate does get to decide how he poses for each of them. Jose does half of him standing up ,and half of him sitting down. Out of those half of them are in black and white and the rest are in color. I am standing in the corner wondering who the guy with William is.
After the shoot, Kate ,and Jose pack up everything that they brought up. Kate says thanks to Mr.Lovett and the other guy.