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Answer 1

Once upon a lab a random cell membrane was rolling around to find it's true love which was cytoplasm. It surrounded many areas before but he didn't like it as much. He met some friends that were always around him like: ribosomes, centrioles, lysosomes, mitochondria and the self centered nucleus. They were all plotting hypothesis and ideas on how they were going to find cytoplasm like bothering the best scientist to make one for them and trying to make a cytoplasm dance but all that made was more organelles of themselves. Then nucleus came to the conclusion that he had friends named: Double v( vacuoles and vesicles), centrioles, Endoplasmic reticulum including his brother smooth reticulum and sister rough reticulum, and the nerdiest one Golgi Apparatus. When nucleus gathered up all his friends he told everyone to gather in as well but they realize that they were overflowing cell wall came out of nowhere and helped them. The organelles realized something was growing inside-around the cell membrane. Organelles noticed it looked slimy but realized it was cytoplasm. They finally made it; Cell membrane felt very happy that he found his love which was all inside of him all this time he just had to let his feeling grow.

Answer 2

I think you should put in that the nucleus found an idea and also I think that you should make the sister a smooth reticulum and the brother a rough reticulum