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Answer 1

I'm not native but I am near to fluent and I may be able to help you
(my French is not as good as the French of @Vincent-Lyon.Fr though)

Answer 2

I've written something in French, do you think you could review it to make sure that the grammar, spelling, tenses is all correct? and that everything is in feminine agreement?

Answer 3

Okay let me see

Answer 4

Wow your French is very good. Since it's lengthy, it'll take me more time to check.

Answer 5

Your French is better than mine, so I'll be hedging instead of boosting:
1. Why use "m'a permis de" in Line 2 Para 1?
2. I'd use "n'importe où" instead of "peu importe où" in Line 3 Para 1.
3. I'd use "dans un temps très court" in Line 5 Para 1.
4. I'd use "qui viennent avec elle" in Line 2 Para 2.
5. I'd add a comma after "par exemple" in Line 2 Para 2.
6. I'd use "et conscients" in Line 5 Para 2.
7. "quels" instead of "quel" in Line 5 Para 2.
8. In Line 2 Para 3 "dont que"?
9. In Line 4 Para 3 I'd use "avec elles" instead of "avec ceci"
10. In Line 5 I'd use "aimées, des situations dangereuses qui se produiraient"

Answer 6

@adrianajones Pourrez-vous répondre à mes questions svp? :)

Answer 7

Perfect! thank you so much!

Answer 8

No problem at all :)