Question

I wrote my first poem ever… what do you think?

Answer 1

Sitting… Waiting… Wishing

I'm sitting waiting wishing
For…
Someone to notice me
Someone to love me
Someone to care

I hide from my pain that
I hold inside
For no one to see
Nobody sees it
They're the ones that hurt me

I'm sitting waiting wishing
For…
Some kind of love
Some kind of friendship
Some kind of happy

I'm sitting waiting wishing
For…
Happiness
Peace
Hope

But sitting and waiting and wishing
It's pointless
Because it's all for…
Things I'll never have

Answer 2

@secret66

Answer 3

@BVB4rmy

Answer 4

@handyandy3

Answer 5

@SGTC!

Answer 6

awesome, and you'll always have me :D

Answer 7

:D

Answer 8

It is very good :3

Answer 9

It's Awesome!!!! <333

Answer 10

Thanks :)

Answer 11

And btw, Nincompoop is a nincompoop. He is worth nothing. No need to mention him xD JK

Answer 12

lol

Answer 13

when did I mention him? lol

Answer 14

LOL You deleted it!

Answer 15

Yerp!! :D

Answer 16

I'm glad you liked it! I didn't think it'd be very good since I've never written a poem before.

Answer 17

its awesome

Answer 18

I really liked this. I thought it was kinda sad.. But hey, this is what poetry is for. Expressing yourself. I could see you writing in the future. You should keep it up and make it a thing. You have talent for this sorta thing.
So, I want you to check this site out. I use it and I've recommeneded many other people for it.

www.allpoetry.com
you can find me on there (charitybugg) if ya want. :)
feel better ^_^

Answer 19

Thanks :D

Answer 20

@SnowCrystal

Answer 21

beautiful :) im always here if u need me

Answer 22

:D

Answer 23

Thanks Snow :)

Answer 24

ur welcome gal :)

Answer 25

:D

Answer 26

this is wonderful

Answer 27

I like it

Answer 28

100% perfect!!

Answer 29

:___: It's Beautiful...

Answer 30

Lol thanks

Answer 31

Hippo it looks like it's just you and I now lol

Answer 32

:D

Answer 33

Great!! :D

Answer 34

Thanks :)

Answer 35

@_Army_Strong_

Answer 36

i love it

Answer 37

Thanks :)

Answer 38

New poem…

Broken skies

My eyes are like the broken skies
Raining on the earth below
My pain feeds those that hurt me
Giving them life to go on
And hurt me again
Bringing back my endless sorrow
There is no hope for my tomorrow

Answer 39

*slow clap*

Answer 40

lol

Answer 41

@Vallarylynn16

Answer 42

oh my goodness I love them ^.^ How have you not written before.. those are amazing :D

Answer 43

ikr

Answer 44

lol Thanks sister :) Thanks bbcream14 :D

Answer 45

welcome:)

Answer 46

:D

Answer 47

nice

Answer 48

Thank you

Answer 49

@alyssa23

Answer 50

great job!!!

Answer 51

Thanks

Answer 52

@Sparrowhawk69 @Whitemonsterbunny17 @samveilbride @sambolin1996 @justnick09

Answer 53

It`s really good keep it up ^,^

Answer 54

thanks

Answer 55

cool

Answer 56

It looks wonderful to me!! A lot of emotion is portrayed through the words, I like it!!! :D
Definitely keep up the writing, you've got a talent, that's for sure. :3

Answer 57

Thank you Whitemonsterbunny

Answer 58

thanks justnick

Answer 59

Beautifully written poem. Nice work. <3

Answer 60

ITZ GOOD BUT KINDA SAD N UM CAN U FAN ME SO CAN MESSAGE U @LadyKatsaTheGraceling

Answer 61

Awww thanks poetryprincess :D and sure sososmart

Answer 62

i like it:)

Answer 63

love it

Answer 64

:D

Answer 65

nice have you send it to hallmark

Answer 66

awesome!!!

Answer 67

Thanks guys :D

Answer 68

UM DIDINT U PUT THIS UP ALREADY

Answer 69

huh?

Answer 70

I can totally relate... I love this. c:

Answer 71

Thank you @EnvyLeague

Answer 72

It`s great> Keep it up -,^

Answer 73

Thanks :D

Answer 74

Any time ^,^

Answer 75

No problem @LadyKatsaTheGraceling

Answer 76

Nice voice!