all i want to know if what they are asking me to do is something like this : dialogue : leah: i have a iphone 5 young man (next to her) : oh really ? can i see it ? leah: yeah sure (hands him the phone) young man: wow its skinny and long. (gives her back the phone) leah: yeah it is. (puts phone down on the seat next to her, to look in her purse).
this is what they are asking me to do Invent dialogue and revise the following paragraph. Use proper spelling and grammar. Leah got distracted talking to someone on the bus about her phone. When she got off at the mall, she realized she had left her purse on the seat!
@Jamierox4ev3r @adrynicoleb helpp ?
does anyone know?
Ok, I am confused on what you want to know. So what do you want to know?
if the dialogue they want me to do is the one i did. for example : my idea of a dialogue is this : leah: i have a iphone 5 young man (next to her) : oh really ? can i see it ? leah: yeah sure (hands him the phone) young man: wow its skinny and long. (gives her back the phone) leah: yeah it is. (puts phone down on the seat next to her, to look in her purse).
are you understanding so far ?
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Ok, I think so. They wanted you to create a dialogue?
yes they want me to create a dialogue with this tiny paragraph: Leah got distracted talking to someone on the bus about her phone. When she got off at the mall, she realized she had left her purse on the seat!
Ok. So far so good. Do you need help with fixing the grammar errors?
but i was wondering if i have the right idea.. ?
Sorry >.< My mind is so scattered today. Anyways, yeah I think you did a really good job! :)
Thank youu !! :D
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