One of my favorite movies that I’ve seen so many times is called Remember the Titans. This movie is based on a true story about a high school football team. There are many reasons why I watch this movie. First, the coach of the Titians brought men of different colors together. During this time in history it was hard for men and women of different races to love each other. There were two high schools in the same town, the schools where divided by colors. Segregation was beginning to end and all the schools were brought together. It was especially hard for the football team, because many players

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One of my favorite movies that I’ve seen so many times is called Remember the Titans. This movie is based on a true story about a high school football team. There are many reasons why I watch this movie. First, the coach of the Titians brought men of different colors together. During this time in history it was hard for men and women of different races to love each other. There were two high schools in the same town, the schools where divided by colors. Segregation was beginning to end and all the schools were brought together. It was especially hard for the football team, because many players

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anonymous · Answer

i would take out the period between movie and first and use a coma or a semicolon. other than that i think it sounds good :)

micahm · Answer

that will work

anonymous · Answer

In your first sentence you should say "which I've seen many times" instead of "that I've seen so many times."

micahm · Answer

ok