2. How can you improve the fable? In addition to sentence structure, choose one of these Author's Tool Box tools that will help you add detail and interest to the story: Sentence Structure—vary the type and combination of sentences to create interest AND Word Choice—add vocabulary that shapes the characters, sets the mood, and expresses a clear tone—consider using some of your rescued vocabulary words into your revised fable.
fable: A Shepherd Boy was tending his flock near a village, and thought it would be great fun to hoax the villagers by pretending that a Wolf was attacking the sheep: so he shouted out, "Wolf! Wolf!" and when the people came running up he laughed at them for their pains. He did this more than once, and every time the villagers found they had been hoaxed, for there was no Wolf at all. At last a Wolf really did come, and the Boy cried, "Wolf! Wolf!" as loud as he could: but the people were so used to hearing him call that they took no notice of his cries for help.
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