i have to write a poem with the rhyme scheme ABAAB this is what i have i dont think its that good but what do you guys say?
Sitting around all alone
me and my friends
only one movement
all thats shown
it comes to a trend

let me be free
and you be you
let me be
the loner out of us three
you, my shadow, and me

no friends
means no drama
means it bends
but never ends
now i go and tell my mama

please help me make it better!

Question

i have to write a poem with the rhyme scheme ABAAB   this is what i have i dont think its that good but what do you guys say?
Sitting around all alone
me and my friends
only one movement
all thats shown
it comes to a trend

let me be free
and you be you
let me be
the loner out of us three
you, my shadow, and me

no friends
means no drama
means it bends
but never ends
now i go and tell my mama

please help me make it better!

anonymous · Answer

o.o its good I think it would sound better if it said Mother at the end :3

31356 · Answer

Wow, spectacular!! :D
You deserve a medal! :D

31356 · Answer

Oh never mind, I can't. :(