Question

First time on here . I suck at writing papers but i can put down all the ideas .I need someone to proofread and make necessary corrections please . ASAP

Answer 1

this is the paper.

Answer 2

adds some sayings from the scientist and you should be great :) btw LOVE IT!!!!!!!

Answer 3

First thing: I've skimmed your paper and find that it's well written, grammatically correct for the most part, informative and well-researched. Congrats.

However: It's asking a lot to hope that someone will read and provide detailed feedback on a paper of this length.

Next time: why not pick out areas of your paper about which you had doubts and request feedback only on those areas?

More power to you!