Question

Shooting Star

Answer 1

I walked home all alone
and in the sky I saw
A shooting star so I sang,

Shooting star don't see
I'm so far from being me
As I sing, I hope you see
I just need one more thing to be me

The wish I make on you tonight
let be there when i wake
truly you'll be so bright

Cause I wanna go home
I wantcha to know
I wanna be myself inside

How am I supposed to love
when all there's left is hating
Where am I supposed to go
When all there's left is rejection

Cause I was so afraid
to wake up from my dreams
and come into reality


it's a song I made up as a lullaby. My little brothers love it.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

@ElizabethS

Answer 4

that's very good

Answer 5

Amazing! I really loved it <3

Answer 6

Wonderful, Again I would say Love the rhyming ! I think your poems are divine... which really wanna makes me rhyme !

Answer 7

Beautiful :)