Question

Would someone look over my essay and tell me what you think…? Thanks for advice!

Answer 1

Who is most responsible for the death of Romeo and Juliet?

Who is the most responsible for the death of Romeo and Juliet? I say Frair Lawerence, do you agree? In the tragedy, Romeo and Juliet by Shakespeare is about two young people who fall in love and later die. Without a doubt, a friend of Romeo's by the name of Friar Lawerence, who is partly responsible for the outcome as also Nurse. Ultimately Romeo and Juliet, who take their lives and so saying that they [Friar and Nurse] most likely are responsible than anyone else in the play.
Friar Lawerence, being partly responsible, at first I didn't believe that Friar was responsible for Romeo and Juliet's death. Friar is a adult and also a priest and has some responsibility in looking over the young. Some say Friar was a mastermind, some even say that he was also behind Juliet from marrying Paris. The plan had some flaws, of course, one of the flaws was not delivering the letter to Romeo and making sure he received it also.
Friar tried to stop Juliet from killing herself after Romeo had poisoned himself. There was nothing Friar could do to stop her. Friar offered to hide Juliet himself, to hide her away from whom thought she was dead, but Juliet refused and killed herself to be with the one she loves. As I said Friar Lawerence is partly responsible for Romeo and Juliet's death as whom Nurse and this is why I think Friar Lawerence is responsible for their death.

Answer 2

@31356

Answer 3

Hey!!! :D

Answer 4

Hi

Answer 5

.....that they [Friar and Nurse] (are) most likely
Insert the are in :D
Let me check the rest :D

Answer 6

Exclude the parenthesis though, lol :D

Answer 7

okay

Answer 8

....... As I said, Friar Lawerence (I think it's Lawrence not Lawerence?)

Answer 9

okay i got that corrected,thanks.

Answer 10

As I said, Friar Lawerence is partly responsible for Romeo and Juliet's death, as whom, Nurse. This is why I think Friar Lawerence is responsible for their death. (Lawrence not Lawerence lol ) :D

Answer 11

I inserted the a period to stop the run-on sentences :D

Answer 12

yeah, got that corrected, all the times i put Lawerence instead of Lawrence

Answer 13

Delete a in that sentence ( my sentence lol)

Answer 14

Oh okay, lol :D

Answer 15

okay, run-on sentence, gotta fix that

Answer 16

Okay, all done, thank you, was everything okay with my essay?

Answer 17

@31356 ???? you there?

Answer 18

Oh sorry, I was doing my chores :D

Answer 19

Yes, everything was PERFECT!!! :D

Answer 20

So perfect that you earned yourself a medal, lol :D

Answer 21

thank you!

Answer 22

My pleasure :D

Answer 23

well i have to get off now but i'll talk to you later ok?

Answer 24

Or if you want to triple check, go online and search online grammar checker?

Answer 25

and you earned a medal to for your help

Answer 26

Okay, bye
~Tears~ lol

Answer 27

Thanks!!! :D

Answer 28

lol

Answer 29

and your welcome xD

Answer 30

Anytime :D