Question

Who can take a little bit of their time and do corrections on my essay? It's not a boring essay. Anyone willing? Please? I promise to do you a favor also. <3 I wrote it very quick, which I think has few mistakes.

Answer 1

Where is it?

Answer 2

There's a lot of grammar checks online :3

Answer 3

Yeah there's grammar checks but not sentence structure, and other stuff like that.

@wwhitlock here you go.

Answer 4

batman that's you? You're now poop! ;o since when? and congrats! :D

Answer 5

im jelly </3

Answer 6

What >.< lol

Answer 7

Oh haha, almost 90 though :3

Answer 8

You're no longer yellow. keep it up ;P

Answer 9

By the way, when writing essays, stay away from words like giggle, that's way toooooo informal. :3 ok back to my assignment >.<

Answer 10

I know, but i couldn't use laugh again ;c

You good at corrections? I only went through the spelling I never really ahd the time to reread it

Answer 11

and im too lazy to do it now.

Answer 12

Right click on words you think are informal, "synonyms" your welcome.

Answer 13

Okay thanks. I would use better wording but this is just for extra points. All I need is a bit of edits, because I know it sounds kind of boring,and idk how to lighten the story.

Answer 14

Maybe tomorrow I'll be in the mood lol Hopefully, whittlock can help tho

Answer 15

Haha, I'd look over it but I got way too much to do myself, and I'm lazy to :3. But, gl tima! :D

Answer 16

Okay appreciate you trying to help [:

Answer 17

Thank you Whhitlock [:
Btw, I was wondering about the spaces in the paragraphs; you've seperated alot, and is there a specif reason why so? That kind of confused me.

I've also noticed you've correct a few mistakes I didn't see. Appreciate it (: