Question

IS this sentence grammatically correct?

Based on previous reports by Mann and McMillan, this amount of sales coming for New Zealand is outrageously satisfying for both the country and the leather business and has spawned brand new doors to the leather industry in New Zealand.

Answer 1

Based on previous reports by Mann and McMillan, the amount of sales coming from New Zealand is outrageously satisfying for both the country and the leather business and has spawned brand new doors to the leather industry in New Zealand.

Answer 2

Actually I would make it into two different sentences so that it isn't so long

Answer 3

Based on previous reports by Mann and McMillan, the amount of sales coming from New Zealand is outrageously satisfying for both the country and the leather business. The amount of sales had also spawned brand new doors to the leather industry in New Zealand.

Answer 4

It is correct.