Question

A poem I wrote. Please tell me what you think ^-^


Cuts

The cuts in my hearts
The scars they are deep
I cry out all alone
In darkness I seep
My heart dark as midnight
Left all alone to weep
But one small glimmer in my life, one shard of hope
That was you my love, you helped me to cope
My soul almost dead, no joy in life
You took it away, I no longer wallow in my strife
The cuts in my heart
They still are deep
The scars, even worse
The mourning so deep
And yet I forget it all
At the sight of you
Thank you for saving me
And for all that you do

-Kitty Blaire

Answer 1

I just don't know if I should submit this or not, >.<

Answer 2

You know, people these days can only write sad poems. It'd be more fun if you wrote a happy poem. But anyways, it's Stupendous! (;

Answer 3

remember one thing that.... you must always believe in your self and your own work..! So you must submit it..!
Cos its a possibility that the work that you (may) think of as not good can be, considered as excellent by (m)any..!

And overall.. its an awesome poem...!
Far better than what most people write..!

Answer 4

Awww thank you. But it's not a sad poem @secret66 , it's happy... ^-^ and thank you both!!!

Answer 5

you are welcome :D

Answer 6

Eh? Isn't it sad? o_o

Answer 7

well it is sad at first.. but don't you see that at the end, there something to be happy about?

Answer 8

@secret66 .... a poem on the topic of love... can't ever be sad...cos its filled up with lots of "happy" moments..:D

Answer 9

it's about my boyfriend... he's helped me so much ^-^ lol i was supposed to write something dramatic... i think this will work ^-^

Answer 10

haha yeah it surely would...:D

Answer 11

thank you guys!!! <3

Answer 12

Beautiful poetry :) Keep writing and never give up!!! @darkest_midnight

Answer 13

Amazing girl>
Keep writing

Answer 14

imazing !

Answer 15

thanks everyone! :D should i write more?

Answer 16

Fabulous!!!!