Question

can someone help me pleasee

Incorporate one additional or different example to better support the controlling idea of this body paragraph. Paste the paragraph below and identify your revision by underlining it within the paragraph

Answer 1

can one of you help me pleaseeeee :)

@Darius25
@rose21
@Uhoh10thgrader

Answer 2

wheres the paragraph

Answer 3

hey

Answer 4

mine?

Answer 5

For me the hook on “ letter from Birmingham jail” is that he helped a lot of people and that he is using a lot of figure language in his letter. Martin Luther is a man that uses strong words, he uses a lot of figurative language in his letter and he uses that saying that we must take action and he uses in his letter a boil as an example, you cannot get rid off a boil you must accept it because it is always going to be there. In his letter he is saying that you can't not do something while you know that injustice is happening. He says that we must take action like I did.

Answer 6

the teacher said that it was good

Answer 7

hi @Darius25 helppp :( :)

Answer 8

ok wats wrong with it

Answer 9

it tells me to do this but i dont know
Incorporate one additional or different example to better support the controlling idea of this body paragraph. Paste the paragraph below and identify your revision by underlining it within the paragrap

Answer 10

For me the hook on “ letter from Birmingham jail” is that he helped a lot of people and that he is using a lot of figure language in his letter. Martin Luther is a man that uses strong words, he uses a lot of figurative language in his letter and he uses that saying that we must take action and he uses in his letter a boil as an example, you cannot get rid off a boil you must accept it because it is always going to be there. In his letter he is saying that you can't not do something while you know that injustice is happening. He says that we must take action like I did.

Answer 11

ok i know what it is saying

Answer 12

yeah thats one of the example (that i gave) but i need another with the paragraph and i cant remember any more examples from any other paragraph

Answer 13

ok what you do look up the letter

Answer 14

wait u do flvs

Answer 15

hey u there

Answer 16

yeah im here

Answer 17

i have to look up examples to support controlling idea of a paragraph from martin luther letter from jail.

Answer 18

i know

Answer 19

wait ill look up some for u

Answer 20

ok thanks and it has to be from a paragraph

Answer 21

hey there fig lan, strong words of freedom,need to take action

Answer 22

from what paragraph is this or you can send me the link so i can look at it if its easier for you

Answer 23

and thank you for helping me

Answer 24

ok

Answer 25

www.sparknotes.com/biography/mlk/section6.rhtml‎

Answer 26

ok thank you were is the part from the example??

Answer 27

??

Answer 28

where is the example?

Answer 29

wat example

Answer 30

i have to look up examples to support controlling idea of a paragraph from martin luther letter from jail.

Answer 31

i dont understand am i supposed to type somtin for u

Answer 32

im sorry no. but i thought that you were going to help me find an example to support controlling idea of a paragraph from martin luther letter from jail.

Answer 33

wait im confused i thought i did

Answer 34

yeah i know and thank you. ok so this is the example right? "hey there fig lan, strong words of freedom,need to take action" now i have to answer from what paragraph (not so important but if you know better) and what it means.

Answer 35

ok sorry i could not help

Answer 36

you helped me allot thank you :)

Answer 37

ok