What do you think about the poem I wrote about April?

April showers bring May flowers,
That bloom at every turn.
Winter blues turn to spring hues,
And bring this world to life.

April showers bring May flowers,
Flowers everywhere!
Forget me not and small sun drop,
Sparkling with the morning dew.

April showers bring May flowers,
Raindrops fall from the sky.
Rain showers that last for hours,
End with a beautiful rainbow.

If April Showers bring May flowers,
On that rainy April Day,
Would all May flowers turn to showers,
On a sunny May Day?

Question

What do you think about the poem I wrote about April?

April showers bring May flowers,
That bloom at every turn.
Winter blues turn to spring hues,
And bring this world to life.

April showers bring May flowers,
Flowers everywhere!
Forget me not and small sun drop,
Sparkling with the morning dew.

April showers bring May flowers,
Raindrops fall from the sky.
Rain showers that last for hours,
End with a beautiful rainbow.

If April Showers bring May flowers,
On that rainy April Day,
Would all May flowers turn to showers,
On a sunny May Day?

anonymous · Answer

I'm not much of a writer, and I'm trying to improve... so feel free to add comments, tips and suggestions! :D

anonymous · Answer

You have some imagery going on, but words lack any meaning or depth beyond that. Narrative context, structure, do not give any meaningful insight on pretty much anything apart from "you like flowers and rainbows"

anonymous · Answer

Good point! ^_^  Thank you for your suggestions @Cloudfall :D

timaashorty · Answer

Other than what cloudfall said, Great job. :] Keep it up!

anonymous · Answer

You're much welcome. Keep on improving your work.
Everyone has the potential, what sets them apart is how persistent they are at something.

anonymous · Answer

ok! Thank you both! :D

anonymous · Answer

I think its cute :D