Question

Currently In the process of making a son with a friend of mine named Bayley. Songs not finished but would like you guys to take a look of how it is now. Be honest with me, I can take criticism.

Answer 1

Still got lots to do on it but heres what we've got so far:

Answer 2

I need you to hold me tight because I might just fight, so just hold me now cause’ I’m passing out. And your love, and your love it always take me away, and your love and your love and my heart it always takes me astray and your love and my heart and your love. . So When the lights come down and were goin’ down just hold on to me and I’ll hold on to you, cause’ we’re all just faces in a crowd. Ya, that’s who we are. Just faces in a crowd. So don’t blow me away cause I’ll just go astray, so just hold me tight cause your love is who I am, oh your love is who I am you'd be the rain in the storm We'd be a symphony so hold me tight cause your love is me oh your love is mine . Come run with me, come and take my hand, I'll love you forever from now until the end. Somewhere out there, is what you wanted, what we wanted. Somewhere out there. Does someone see just what need, what I want, does someone care oh someone Somewhere way out there... Oh your love your love is who I am so just hold me now and take my hand, just hold my hand and dance with me. Now your mine and now im yours and you’ve been ever so hard to find, so hard to get; but now were together, now and forever, just like that. Oh and our love and our heart, it’s who we are who I am and who you are.

Answer 3

Heres what the melody will kinda sound like:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wOxjLnR8JR4

Answer 4

@bayley1323 @ikram002p @Mchilds15 @msumner @beccaboo333 @orion92898

Answer 5

Need to add somebackground vocals like oohs and things like that. I'm really into this and want to make it just inspire.

Answer 6

i like it !

Answer 7

Thanks for checkin' it out!

Answer 8

When you guys answer, not to sound bossy but, can you say what/why you like and what you don't like? I need lots of feedback.

Answer 9

i liked the lyric cant wait untill u finish it

Answer 10

romantic peoms attract me always ,
and tried to match btw the muisic in the other song
sounds awesome

Answer 11

Sweet thanks!

Answer 12

@adrynicoleb @allopersonwhat @aayushi.somani @ams98

Answer 13

@bakonloverk @divu.mkr @Darrius @ParthKohli @Preetha @CyberShadow @ShadowLegendX @surjithayer

Answer 14

Your making a son...

Answer 15

?

Answer 16

Currently In the process of making a SON

Answer 17

Ohhhh, ya, spelling error.

Answer 18

Lolz

Answer 19

Nice.

Answer 20

@nincompoop @Nurali

Answer 21

@jlg030597 @Ummah.Naja @minnie♥mouse @MasonLovesNinjaTurtle @missbrightside15

Answer 22

Is it a rap song?

Answer 23

I'd hope not.

Answer 24

Look at the link I sent. That's what the melody will sound a little like.

Answer 25

@random231 @Taylor<3sRin

Answer 26

Do you play an instrument?

Answer 27

Bass guitar, acoustic guitar, electric guitar, viola. I'm adding piano to the song.

Answer 28

cool!

Answer 29

I'd like to learn harmonica.

Answer 30

the instruments I would like to learn are, harmonica, banjo, drums, mandolin, and piano.

Answer 31

I can still make piano parts even though I don't know how to play. I have been playing guitar for 8 years so that'll be something easier or me to add to the song.

Answer 32

Okay. Can you do me a favor and put what lyrics that you do have in the correct format bcuz idk what goes where

Answer 33

I don't know yet either. =). Like I said, were not finished yet. We made this just last night.

Answer 34

I'm more focused on getting the lyrics done. When we finish the lyrics then I'll start putting in whats the chorus, verses, bridge, intro, etc are.

Answer 35

What mean by that is can you put it in stanzas for example;

Your love towards me is full of hatred and its sour
When I look at you it drains out my power
You tell me you hate me then call the next how
That's why your heart reeks of bitterness: Go take a shower

Answer 36

Nice, you make that??

Answer 37

If you do it the way you are planning to then you wont get anywhere with this song.

Answer 38

Lol Yeah just now

Answer 39

Nice. And why do you think that? Shyeesh, ain't the first song I've made. This is just one that I remade of bayleys old edition.

Answer 40

You can use it if you want. And that word isnt suppose to be how. Its suppose to be hour

Answer 41

Okay then Im sorry if I've offended you in any way. It just didnt sound organized thats all

Answer 42

Ya, I figured that.=)

Answer 43

No, as I said. I can take critisicm.

Answer 44

Intro, verse, chorus, bridge, end.

Answer 45

OKey dokey. Then I'm perfect for the job. I'm a spoken word poet. I do this type of stuff for a living. :)

Answer 46

well, not bridge and then end. you know what I mean.

Answer 47

that's how its written

Answer 48

I'm a musician. I do it for experience.=)

Answer 49

the* experience.

Answer 50

I'm going to listen to the instrumental and hit you up later. What is it generally going to be about. I'm a musician also. I get paid for that too :)

Answer 51

Eh, it's kinda about love but you know, threw together some words less than 15 minutes.

Answer 52

Lol. okay I'll write some stuff and send it to you later

Answer 53

Sweet. I'll be looking forward to it.

Answer 54

this is really good!

Answer 55

I'm trying to figure out how I can word my response to this....

Answer 56

I tried singing it to myself and I can't get down to a melody or even to something that sounds like a song. It would help if you put in in format, but I mean, as a fellow artist, the song is pretty good. It's only rocky in some places but it'll even out when you put it into the verses/chorus/bridge/etc...

Answer 57

Yep. Don't worry, I have a melody to it.

Answer 58

Do you plan on singing it yourself?

Answer 59

It still bothers me. I'm still touching the lyrics up a bit. I donno, I think I'll sing a little but I'll need to have a girl singing it. I might sing the whole thing. I just want to remind you all that bayley is also the one that helped right a lot of this.

Answer 60

Awesome! I wish I could help out but looks like you've got this covered lol

Answer 61

Donno. Never heard you sing. I need to hear people sig because theirs a certain type of voice I want. I need it more like this type of voice:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rtOvBOTyX00

Answer 62

sing*

Answer 63

Oh man, I love her voice c: If you want, i'll upload a vid of me singing? I can't really be the judge of if I sound like her, but I have been told my voice is good(hence why I'm in a band, not for my sucky bass skills lol)

Answer 64

I'll be glad to hear you. I will need you to impress me. ;)

Answer 65

Hahaha I don't know about that x) But i'll see what I can do. Any song preference?

Answer 66

Mabye you could sing the Christina perri song?

Answer 67

No problem :)

Answer 68

Alright. Message it to me when your finished and make sure to take your time and practice it. Can't wait to hear it!

Answer 69

Try to play it along with you in the video when you record it.

Answer 70

I Love the song!

Answer 71

Thanks!

Answer 72

yeah i love it. :)

Answer 73

Got more of it edited so that it makes a lot more sense! I'll post it some time later.