Question

PLEASE HELP ME I WILL GIVE U A MEDAL! THIS IS MY LIFE

Answer 1

Question 1 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

Historical buildings in the small Kansas town were completely destroyed by the unexpected storm.

Which word may be eliminated to remove redundancy?

Historical

Small

Completely

Unexpected

Question 2 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows:

The town of Belmond, Iowa needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.

The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.

If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.

With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Question 3 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Which sentence includes an announcement phrase that should be eliminated to make the statement more concise?

Assigning lockers to middle school students is an effective way to teach them time management.

Lockers should be provided to middle school students so that they can learn time management.

Middle school students would learn time management if they were provided lockers.

This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management.

Question 4 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the following passage and answer the question that follows:

Ashton enjoyed studying drama in high school. Ashton plans on studying drama in college.

Which choice best combines the sentences to eliminate repeated words while maintaining the meaning?

Ashton enjoyed high school and plans on studying drama in college.

Ashton enjoyed drama in high school and plans on studying it in college.

Ashton enjoyed studying drama in high school and plans on studying in college.

Ashton enjoyed studying drama in high school and plans on studying drama in college.

Question 5 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

A longer phrase was converted to a single word.

A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.

Redundant phrases were eliminated.

Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Answer 2

I WILL TELL YOU WHAT I THINK AND PLZ EXPLAIN ME IT IF I AM WRONG! THANKS :)

Answer 3

@tHe_FiZiCx99 @surjithayer @wrinkle @highschoolmom2010 @AccessDenied @ElisaNeedsHelp @LilliBelle @alanaleigh13 @deathgrowl @eliassaab @lexiistarr @IMayNeedHelp @toxicsugar22 @vicky*24 @cheergurl_99 @zion_15 @trailasia and every one else plz help

Answer 4

1: A OR B

Answer 5

2: B OR C

Answer 6

1)C

Answer 7

HOW IS #1 C?

Answer 8

CAN ANYONE ELSE PUT THERE OPINION?

Answer 9

2)C

Answer 10

3)A

Answer 11

4)B

Answer 12

What are the bolded words in #5

Answer 13

how you know ths?

Answer 14

ANYONE ELSE PLZ HELP ME ANSWER THESE QUESTIONS!

Answer 15

DOES ANY OF U DISAGREE WITH ANY OF THE ANSWERS THAT SHE PUT?

Answer 16

SO WHAT ABOUT 5?

Answer 17

4 is letter B

Answer 18

I know because this is all familiar to me and #1 is C because they don't need to put completely and destroyed

Answer 19

OK THANKS WHAT ABOUT #5?

Answer 20

What are the bolded letter in number 5 which words were in bold?

Answer 21

YES

Answer 22

Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

this is what it says which words are bold?

Answer 23

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

Answer 24

OH THE LETTERS IN BOLD ARE but my father disliked hail more.

Answer 25

but he hated hail more

Answer 26

Haha okay thanks one sec

Answer 27

KK

Answer 28

5)C

Answer 29

UM CAN U HELP ME @vicky*24

Answer 30

I GOT TO RESUBMIT IT

Answer 31

@LilliBelle will u help me with the ones i got wrong? plz

Answer 32

Which ones were wrong? O.o

Answer 33

Which sentence includes an announcement phrase that should be eliminated to make the statement more concise?

Assigning lockers to middle school students is an effective way to teach them time management.

Lockers should be provided to middle school students so that they can learn time management.

Middle school students would learn time management if they were provided lockers.

This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management.

Answer 34

it is not a

Answer 35

and this one too : Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

A longer phrase was converted to a single word.

A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.

Redundant phrases were eliminated.

Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Answer 36

it is not c

Answer 37

so what is the first one @LilliBelle

Answer 38

?????

Answer 39

Sorry one sec

Answer 40

kk

Answer 41

for number 5 I would say D then

Answer 42

ok and 4?

Answer 43

Isnt that number 3?

Answer 44

WHAT DO U MEAN?

Answer 45

THE ONE OF THE LOCKERS

Answer 46

YOu said number 3 was wrong not number 4

Answer 47

yeah the locker one is 3

Answer 48

If its not A then it should be B

Answer 49

LOL ok let me see what i got!

Answer 50

LOL can u help me with one that i got wrong

Answer 51

Yep!

Answer 52

thanks sorry for taking ur time

Answer 53

The passage below can be revised to make it more concise. Which word is a modifier that can be eliminated because it adds no meaning?

Dr. Madison is somewhat skeptical about stories of global warming. She has gathered scientific data in remote areas to prove her position.

Somewhat

Global

Scientific

Remote

Question 4 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.

It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.

It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.

It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Answer 54

well these re just 2 new ones

Answer 55

are just 2 new ones and that is all i need help with plz