Question

Is someone good at editing poems?

Answer 1

I am. what do u need help with Doll

Answer 2

I want one of my poems edited. Would you able to do that for me?

Answer 3

I can try ill tag @linda3 in case im not able to

Answer 4

Okay, and I know she's good at this too [: Just gimme a sec to attach it.

Answer 5

If you find a something you think will sound better you can do that [:

Answer 6

Are you getting it? :D

Answer 7

i think so

Answer 8

Ok

Answer 9

You might want to ask @linda3 because I personaly like it and don't think it needs editied

Answer 10

Ok thanks

Answer 11

welcome u did great keep it up

Answer 12

thank you![=

Answer 13

welcome doll

Answer 14

Do you still want me to look at it?

Answer 15

Yes please!

Answer 16

ok :)

Answer 17

I read it. I personally think it's wayyy to graphic. But that's my own opinion. - and if you are aiming for a higher audience it's good. but it's like basically 'almost' rated R. haha... but i don't know. I wouldn't advice 13 year olds reading it. but i mean this is just all based off of my opinion. But other than the context- it is beautifully written! You've gotten so far your writing just wow! :) <3 keep up the beautiful work!!!

Answer 18

Haha I know it can be inappropriate for some ages , but no it's not going to be posted for little kids or something. [and im 17 incase you think im young lol ] From the last time you edited my other ones, I've learned so many stuff; How to pick which line goes on which line Etc. and since I don't have anyone teaching my about poetry, I improve from peoples thought on here and from poemish! [; Btw; What you said means alot. Thank you!

Answer 19

I hope you don't mind, but I read it too. I really liked it and I got a little sad in the last two sentences, it's so good. ^_^ Only grammar mistakes :)

Answer 20

Of course I don't mind [= Thanks. I really appreciate it!

Answer 21

You're welcome ^-^