How can rewrite my english paper to give varying sentence structure? I am writing about the elements of modernism and how each of this elements fit in with "The Love Story of J. Alfred Prufrock. I am also looking for someone to check for grammar.

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Can anyone give me some ideas?

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I corrected a much grammar as I could.

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Use short, medium, long sentences.
Have some of them begin with introductory phrases or clauses.
Ask some questions that you answer.
Quote other people or sources.