Question

1. What three specific items do you see as strengths in this writing piece?

The piece was not quite a full paragraph but I did like that he came up with an example of books being banned on how to make bombs as a result from the Boston bombing.



2. What is the overall writing piece about? (Be specific.)

It was about the banning of books and he used the example of the Boston Bombing and how they banned books teaching people how to build bombs.

grammar check please

Answer 1

The piece was not quite a full paragraph; however I did like that he came up with an example of books on how to make bombs being banned as a result of the Boston bombing

This article of writing was about the banning of books, the prohibition of books on how to construct bombs after the Boston Bombing was used as an example.

I just moved a few things around and changed some words, take a look and see how you like it, your grammar and whatnot looks fine!