Question

I Need Someone To Give Me A Honest Opinion On My Poem/Rap<3

Answer 1

Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
You Know I Cut
And So Do You
If Thats Wrong
Nothings Right
So Say Goodbye
To The Morning Light<3
Don't Touch That Razor
Don't Touch That Blade
You Already Know
It Won't Help You In Life
When Your Free
You Won't Face No Pain
I Promise You
Everything Will Not Be The Same(:
Who do you think you are
Trying to out rap me
You'll never succeed.
I always bleed crying because everything
Is just so overwhelming
So b!tch please take everything back
They dont know how to act when they see you tryna rap!!!

Answer 2

it look great to me

Answer 3

Why Thank You

Answer 4

looks good :P

Answer 5

Thanks xD

Answer 6

Its wonderful sis

Answer 7

I love it just as much as i love you!!!!<33

Answer 8

Haha Thanks /.\

Answer 9

No problem