Question

This Little Girls
Been Going Through
So Much ----
Its Been Going On Since 2006
Every Bad Memory
She Can Barley Breathe
Its So Tough
Her Own Family Split
She In So Deep
Just One More Time
Shes Going Blind.
She Wakes Up With A Slow HeartBeat
Her Pillows Red
And Her Memories Dead!

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Answer 1

@kewlgeek555 @Marco,Phillip @asatt32 @Nateyboo @jlg030597

Answer 2

good job.

Answer 3

Thanks(:

Answer 4

that is very good poem

Answer 5

*rap

Answer 6

first line need to be looked at

Answer 7

y

Answer 8

this little girl or these little girls

Answer 9

i see what your talking about

Answer 10

just giving advice

Answer 11

it was about my self when i was little so nothing needs to be changed thanks @M.D.Saxon

Answer 12

im srry ariel she burnt you marco she burnt you

Answer 13

im so srry ariel

Answer 14

great poem sis

Answer 15

thanks @M.D.Saxon and thanks sissy @alyssa23

Answer 16

It is not great

Answer 17

It is not good

Answer 18

It is ******* amazing

Answer 19

Aww Thanks<3 At First I Was Likee Wahhh Then Now Is Like Dawhhh xD Shanks

Answer 20

LMFAO

Answer 21

I kinda hoped I would give that kind of impression

Answer 22

Haha It Did But Thanks I Wrote That When I Was 9

Answer 23

@djcool31

Answer 24

hey @ArielLeosiudhs i have a poem published in writing and music now

Answer 25

you do? @jlg030597

Answer 26

yes its right below yours in writing and should be the first one in music

Answer 27

yeah thats really good tay :) i love it

Answer 28

thanks(:

Answer 29

np baby :)