Question

Heres a poem i wrote.

Answer 1

Is it a time for love or a time for peace
When will time and wars ever cease
But if you ask I cannot tell
For I’m not God if you can’t tell
For he is in Heaven watching over us
You can’t hide from him on even a bus
Where ever you go he is there with you
He stays in your heart and helps you choose what to do
Sometimes our mind tells us different so we disobey
Never the less in your heart he will stay
In life and death he by your side
All you have to do is decide
Will you admit that you have sinned your whole life?
Will you believe that Jesus died on a cross to give you hope and a light?
Will you believe that he died for you and ross again three days later?
Will you confess that Jesus is Lord through this worlds beating and batter?
If you will do all these things and pray to the Lord and give him your all.
He’ll be in your heart in flash he wouldn’t stall.
And when you accept a party will happen
The angels will rejoice with singing and Clappin.
And you will know your choice is true
When you see a change in what you do
Not a change in everyday things and such
A change in your follow with God and how you love him so much.

Answer 2

@*Scotto0715* @YanaSidlinskiy @hotdancingbabe14 @Mashy

Answer 3

Amazing Jamie! :D
Keep up the good work! :)

Answer 4

Lol, Sorry jamison! ^.^

Answer 5

So great and fantastic!!!!! Same here keep up the good work!!!! No matter what others say("you just want to show off").....That of course is NOT me!!! Such great talent! You would be able to publish a book with poems!! I have faith in you "Bro" But stand in faith knowing that God is fighting for you! Don't look back neither side to side! Look up and forward!!

Answer 6

It's really good, but please keep poetry in the writing section only.

Answer 7

THIS IS AMAZINGGGGGG. I LOVE ITTTT. <3 But... ya know... people get mad when you put it in the wrong category. I just dont want you to get in trouble. Lol. But yeah, i loved it. Its great. c:

Answer 8

your good a this....

Answer 9

awwww thanks

Answer 10

@travisbrown372

Answer 11

awesome
just amazing

Answer 12

I could make it a rap if i wanted to lol

Answer 13

lol

Answer 14

Good Job!! *^.^* I really Liked it!!

Answer 15

Love it baby @jlg030597