Poem Poems are that one thing, That one thing that can explain everything. We read them for a smile or frown, But we write them to get things off our mind. Poems help us through our thoughts, We are the ones who choose how to read them. You have happy, You have Sad. But one poem can be ether or
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Oh, I nee help to, but I'll try to help you. Whats the question exactly?
no question its just a poem on poems and tell me what you think
OH, you wrote it?
yes
Hmmm... I really like it alot actually, I could never write any thing, but I would PERSONALLY make it rhyme a a bit more? I'm not trying to be mean I actually DO think its really good.
i understand your thought on making it rhyme but not all poems rhyme
I know, :) I dint say I hated it, dont get the wrong idea, I actually do love it, That was just my opinoin! I hop you keep writing in the future. ^-^
i respect that ill tag you in a few of my older post thank you for your thoughts
No problem! ^-^
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hey Marco good job, nice deer too! Imma big hunter
All your poems are amazing !
thank you @Nateyboo and Brett
Your welcome (:
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