Question

here my song

the first time i saw you you were standing over there on the ice going round and round on your ice-skates

soon enough i am going to run into the wall a fall hard on the ice and there you are standing there

(that's what i have so far )

feel free to add more to it

Answer 1

feel free to do want you want with it

Answer 2

My only concern is if someone decides to take your first part and write the rest. That would be considered plagiarism where no one would write your full name stating you wrote a section. Same goes for if you were to get all lyrics from users around you. You could take them and claim it all as your own. Just be careful with this post.

Also, what you have so far seems pretty good :)

Answer 3

no i would not take the credit it for them i have so many song of my owen that i write on the bus

Answer 4

but if it's concerns you i will do what you say

Answer 5

Okay well it was just a little let you know kind of thing. Someone else might do the same. It goes for everyone who may read this post. :) Just being friendly helping you and others out that's all.

I think you should try to finish the lyrics yourself. I'd be really happy to read over them when you finish. If not then let this become a song thread of making lyrics. (not 100% sure if that's allowed) Either way, I think your next line should deal with the coldness of the ice.

Answer 6

ok i will fished it today the next line is about running into the same girl after a long time apart

Answer 7

@beccaboo333

here is the song or you can go to https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=83R4k9y2Q6k&feature=autoshare to here it