Question

Help with conjunctions!!

1. Many families enjoy amusement parks in the summer time. Not many families have great experiences with them. People mistakenly visit amusement parks on weekends. Crowds and long lines of people can make parks miserable. It is better to visit parks in the middle of the week. Lines are not as long. Crowds are smaller.

Can you help edit this paragraph with conjunctions! Thanks~

Answer 1

time, but not many

weekends, although crowds

because lines are not as long and crowds are smaller.

Answer 2

I would say "People mistakenly visit amusement parks on weekends, even though crowds and long lines of people can make parks miserable."