Question

I tried to write a poem. please comment below to let me know how is it..! true comments would be appreciated..! :)

Answer 1

"BEING A GIRL"
Being a girl, powerful and serene,
time has come, to evolve a series,
changes that never take place,
but we have to do it,
for the future that is coming ahead.

A girl is not less than a boy,
she is emotional,
but can reach to that height,
she is soft,
but is strong inside,
A girl is more faithful than a boy,
never leaves her family,
even for the sake of her life.

She is in a loch,
when the time comes,
to leave her family and turn to go,
she becomes emotional,
seeing her dad cry,
looking back to him,
wanting to snub this evening,
but acts as a stag,
she solaced him and said-
I will be there dad,
even on the last times of my breathe.

she is a girl,
Powerful and serene,
wanting to break everything,
but still lives with an ease,
trying to change it with the peace..!
-AS..

Answer 2

@chmvijay @ikram002p @Mashy @shereenkhan @nirmalnema @AravindG @aaryaancoool @hartnn @rvc

Answer 3

just awessssssome.....

Answer 4

Its beautiful! :) Nicely put.
It could be longer though.
And stupid are those girls who think they are equal to boys, they are far, far more superior than boys :)

Answer 5

awesome @aayushi.somani
loved it.
the poem is awesome on girl's strength

Answer 6

a girl is mno less than a boy
it's just the difference of the will power between them.

Answer 7

hey its nice yaaa i just read this yesterday :) keep the same :)
@Rina.r @Kristen17 @petiteme how is this

Answer 8

thanks @hartnn @rvc @chmvijay @ajeetkumarseo @aaryaancoool
thanks a lot..! :)

Answer 9

@CO_oLBoY @random231 @divu.mkr @shrutipande9

Answer 10

beautiful poem

Answer 11

wonderful poem

Answer 12

Its really NICE!! *_* .

Answer 13

thanks everyone..! :) thanks a lot..!

Answer 14

Wow that was spectacular, Yoshi! Please show us some more!!! :3

Answer 15

thanks @adrynicoleb and yeah shure i'll post some in my breaks..! :)

Answer 16

I can't wait to see them :D

Answer 17

Please tag me when you post them :3

Answer 18

yeah shure @adrynicoleb :)
btw thanks for the appreciation..! :)

Answer 19

Lol you're welcome :)

Answer 20

guyes tell me if i do need to make changes in my style or anything ?

Answer 21

Hmm. Like someone said earlier (somewhere way up there ^), I would try to make it a little longer. I feel like there should be a little bit more to it. But that's about it. :)

Answer 22

okay thanks..! i'll try to do it next time..! :) @adrynicoleb

Answer 23

:P

Answer 24

Wow...a beautiful poem @aayushi.somani :) You truly have a talent for this and I would love to see more pieces of musical art from you.

Answer 25

omg..! thanks @Shad0w i would post some whenever i get time..! :)
thankyou so much..! :)

Answer 26

Be sure to tag me :P

Answer 27

yeah shure i would tag u too..! :P

Answer 28

it's awesome poem.
u describe about girl power.

Answer 29

it is nice.

Answer 30

yeah.. thanks @shereenkhan

Answer 31

I luved it very well put

Answer 32

thankyou so much..! :) @its,miranda

Answer 33

ur welcome it was the best I ever read

Answer 34

omg.. that was something big for me..! :) thankyou soo much..! :) @its,miranda

Answer 35

well ur very welcome

Answer 36

wow! really beautiful...

Answer 37

thanks ash.. @xxAshxx

Answer 38

u know my opinion this poem is soft and sweet as much as u r from inside , ur very sensitive person to wrote such emotional like this it touched my heart , addy ur strong and FYI ur not equal to boyes ur much worth than that , again i loved ur poem .
ur dad is lucky to have u

Answer 39

omg thanks koko.! love u ..! :* @ikram002p

Answer 40

its good .!

Answer 41

this is really good...well done..:D

Answer 42

:O its so so so beautiful :')

Answer 43

lol thanks @TaylorTerminate :)