Question

PLEASE CAN SOMEONE CHECK MY GRAMMAR please

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is my work :( and I

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speak spanish, so it's hard :(

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@TheSecretsToday

Answer 4

sry my eyes hurt already ... too long lol

Answer 5

really? my teacher told me "You do a good job of using your research as support here. I would like you to read your writing aloud to work on your grammar and conventions, though."

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sorry ._.

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you do have several grammar issues but they are pretty easy to fix. I will give them to you one at a time.

Answer 8

"The phone was found in close proximity to her," said Sgt. Jon Felty, Allen police; this happens during !!all the year!! , text!! and driving has become the !!reason number one!! of accidents in the last five to seven years.
during the year or all year long. texting. number one reason. make it a new sentence between all year and texting and driving

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Some programs such as Public Service Announcement, want!!s!! to raise !!the!! awareness about careful driving. Even with all !!this!! warnings about be!! careful while driving, !!a!! 77% of teenager believe that that kind of tragedy could !!not!! happen!!s!! to them because they feel confident that they can safely text!!ing!! while driving.

want to raise awareness about . even with all these. being careful . get rid of the a in front of 77%. kind of tragedy could never happen to them . can safely text while driving.

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is this making any sense?

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so, I don't understand the sign !!!!!

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I am putting !! where there is a problem. then I tell you how to fix it at the end of each post. understand?

Answer 13

oooh ok hahaha thanks

Answer 14

you want me to keep going?

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yes

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But teenagers don’t see the problem, teens that text!!ing!! while driving spend!!s!! approximately 10% of their driving time go!! outside of their lane. This generation of teenagers!!should be aware of the dangers and suffering that could result if they keep acting like experts on the roads, or !!such!! if they had three eyes.

just text not texting. while driving spend. going outside of. teenagers should. as instead of such.

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Maybe PSA need to display most striking images in the ads for teens just not only take consciousness, also, be afraid and think before taking his cell phone when they are driving.
this sentence doesn't make sense at all.

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The Public Service Announcement says !!that is enough!! with their announcements to preventing accidents and avoiding negligence. The Public Service Announcement states real stories about teenagers who lost their life in a car accident caused by texting while driving. They !!care to!! do this job thinking they will get to raise awareness among teenagers of the dangers !!to be!! behind the wheel.
that it is enough. get rid of care to . of being behind the wheel

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are you still following? :)

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yes

Answer 21

mmm... so.... I just have to check where you put that sign?

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They amazed the audience with stories such as Alex’s death and how all her dreams are over !!for!! texting while driving.
Are over because of.

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yes

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Teenagers do not want to hear the risks and they just want to live !!the!! life in their own way.
Get rid of the.

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Teenagers keep texting while they are driving, risking their life!!,!!
Needs to be a period not a comma.

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Organizations like The Public Service Announcement believe that with their publicity they will reduce the number of distracted driving incidents, but teenagers ignore their warning!!. D!!espite the fact that 21% of distracted teen drivers involved in fatal accidents were distracted by cell phones.
Make this all one sentence.

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"The phone was found in close proximity to her," we will be hearing more of this kind of news!!, !!because teens don’t reflect about the consequences despite !!of!! being 3,000 deaths and 300,000 injuries per year.
No need for the comma. Despite there instead of despite of.

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The Public Service Announcement is failing trying to create concern because as a result we have 77% of teenager feels very confident that they can safely texting while driving.
texting while driving is not a result of public service announcements.

Answer 29

really good last sentence!

Answer 30

can you help me with a quick Spanish question??

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hello?

Answer 32

Ok! of course

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thanks

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I can help you in whatever you want, you deserve it

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just a second

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ok

Answer 37

sorry my computer just locked up. now I will get the question!

Answer 38

generalmente, ¿a qué hora __ levanta tu familia. is it supposed to be "se" in the blank?

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yes! it's "se"

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thanks!
después de __, siempre me seco el pelo con la secadora. is it supposed to be "me ducho"?

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mm... do you have options? because is not "me ducho"

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ducharme, me ducho , se ducha, ducharse

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is "ducharme"

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okay thanks!
¿qué te parece __ vestido pastel para el verano?
is it supposed to be "ese"?

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for me looks fine, do you have any other option? but sounds good

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ese, esa, esos, esas

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yes, it's "ese"

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Are you spanish?

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ha! no. definitely a second language :)

Answer 50

hahahaha ok

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esta tarjeta de crédito la aceptan en más tiendas que ___ tarjeta.
is it " aquella"?

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yes, maybe... do you have any other option?

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aquel, aquellos, aquellas, aquella

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yes, it's "aquella"

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thank you SO much for the help! feel free to ask any time you need help with anything :)

Answer 56

Ok, thanks to you! you can ask me any time something in spanish! gracias!

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de nada!

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good job!