Question

We all take a walk,
but we dont have the need to talk
Why is it so hard to speak,
I feel like I am at the top of a peek.
Short of air,
This is not fair.
Does she really even care.

Answer 1

@1996nightrider @secret66 @SnowCrystal @AlyssaLynnGale @Ashleyisakitty @adrynicoleb @ArielLeo_Single_LOL @aprilann143 @bubbles-are-cool. @beccaboo333 @Nateyboo @alyssa23 @linn99123 @rose21 @Taylor<3sRin @Taylor<3sRin @undeadknight26 @its,miranda @orion92898 @Preetha @secret88 @staree @Destinymasha @grace111 @Gabylovesyou @gabbyetay @SarahEZZMcK @JAMIE<3you @jojo9999 @julieishere21 @countryboy97 @Cydney_Morgan @mahnoorkeen2001

Answer 2

I like it is there more?

Answer 3

awww are you okay??? message me

Answer 4

I like how you put it together with the words just flowing its deep and makes me think about my past . keep the good writeing up

Answer 5

You have a slight grammar error...peek = peak.

Answer 6

it sounds sad x:

Answer 7

@orion92898 their might be
@linn99123 thank you I know it isnt great but hey its from the heart that is all that matters.
@julieishere21 thank you
@undeadknight26 thank you for the correction.
@bubbles-are-cool. lol its not really

Answer 8

I'm sad to say
My heart is broke
Through the lies
The pain and hurt
Your still a jerk
I still love you so
Its so hard to see you go </3

Answer 9

now thats sad ^ :(

Answer 10

yes it is

Answer 11

its just how i feel :/

Answer 12

You guys keep it up...yall gonna make me cry ;-;
Great poems...

Answer 13

Thanks @undeadknight26 dont cry i cry :(

Answer 14

Pj you are blessed. this is absolutely amazing

Answer 15

its depressing /.\

Answer 16

Nice. :)

Answer 17

it does sound that what @bubbles-are-cool.

Answer 18

which one?

Answer 19

yours mostly^^

Answer 20

its supose to be im very depressed at this moment sorry /.\

Answer 21

its fine & is it because of the guy in the poem? o:

Answer 22

thats really great @Marco,Phillip I love the way it flows also rhymes .

Answer 23

Thank you @grace111

Answer 24

no problem :)

Answer 25

yea i know :/

Answer 26

Oh my that's amazing >.<

Answer 27

right?!

Answer 28

Thank you @Jadeishere

Answer 29

Lol Tariq thanks for sharing that with us all @Marco,Phillip

Answer 30

@kewlgeek555 brah look at this man XD

Answer 31

Omg Tariq I read that wrong

Answer 32

you read everything wrong :p

Answer 33

I know >.<

Answer 34

"brah"

Sir, but my, wasn't that unprofessional? ;)

Answer 35

LOL cx

Answer 36

My friend...It is very unprofessional but i was trying to talk like the others. I am sorry my friend. It shall not happen again.

Answer 37

You work that professionalism bby. ;o

Answer 38

lolz. You know it ;)

Answer 39

Hey I wrote a few poems anyone want to hear one? I will let you choose which one. There are three.

Answer 40

post them

Answer 41

Post them in a different post. c:

Answer 42

Okay I will mention you it will take a min to type tho.

Answer 43

It's a really good start; I just feel like there should be more to the poem. It seemed as if you had more to say. :)

Answer 44

@tanya123

Answer 45

@tanya123 @ElizabethS

Answer 46

You're a polished writer tbh (;

Answer 47

True ^^^^^^