Question

Okay this is my three poems!

Answer 1

I spend all day cleaning
In my mind I am dreaming
Of a day
When I can say,
"I am free from my mother"
I have no other
Since my father died
Now there is no one to guide
My ever wandering thoughts
My heart is tied into knots

I can't help but to think
How my life would be
If my dad were here
And I didn't live my life in fear
How can I stay much longer
My chores take control and and I'm all alone
But secretly my mind wanders free
Just to wake the next day
And my Fairytail is over
A new day awaits
As the guards open up the gates.

Answer 2

(That was Cinderella)

Answer 3

They are great I love the 2nd one

Answer 4

awesome job. great grammar and great literacy

Answer 5

I Can Live My Life Without You:

I gave you my heart
And you played the part
Of the boy in my dreams
Who was tearing at the seams
You helped me to see
What I could be
If I were to try
To get by
In someone elses shoes

I cannot believe
You made me see
What life would be like
If I weren't to flee
From every little thing
You told me a lie
But I will get by
I wish you could see
What I have grown to be
Without you today
You helped me to say,
"I can live my life without you."

Answer 6

Rapunzel:

The walls of my tower
Get taller by the hour
Waiting for my Prince Charming
It is alarming
How long it is taking.
I am shaking
My fears take over
And then it is all over
I have no chance
To dance
With the man of my dreams
I wish he could hear my screams
I know there are plenty
My mind is bending
My life is pending
Waiting for you to come
Then I will know you are The One.

Answer 7

Be sure to tell me what you think please.
@JAMIE<3you @kewlgeek555

Answer 8

@ArielLeo_Single_LOL

Answer 9

im really truly sorry but i will read this like in 20 mins because my wisdom tooth needs to be pulled out and im in so much pain

Answer 10

Oh okay I get it tell me what you think when you get around to it..

Answer 11

@JayBaybie @bashirk @bakonloverk

Answer 12

What does everyone think????

Answer 13

£_£ speech less. Words can not describe of your poems

Answer 14

Really?????

Answer 15

Yes you have outvdohe yourself

Answer 16

Out done*

Answer 17

Thank you!

Answer 18

No problem ^ _ ^

Answer 19

:} P

Answer 20

I really like them

Answer 21

Awesome!!! I am glad you don't think they suck as much as they do..

Answer 22

^_^ of course

Answer 23

Beautiful <3 ;-;

Answer 24

My favorite is "I Can Live My Life Without You". It came right from the heart. :3

Answer 25

Glad you liked them!

Answer 26

cool

Answer 27

;P

Answer 28

^_^

Answer 29

I enjoyed the first poem it expressed your fears and you wants in full details and it gave a clear view of you as a person so humble, loving and just wanting your fathers love. Your mother is pure but it don't replace your fathers love.

Answer 30

Glad you got something so inspired out of my little poem.