Question

can some one help me write an essay? cuz I don't no what to write about

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@TheOcean @ElvenBlackout HELP

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what is the topic. i only have like 2 min, then i m gone for 10 min. then i come back on/

Answer 3

okay well all I have to do it write an essay it has to be 5 pharagraph and that's it but idk what ima write about

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why did you send me that what for a profile pic?????? but I need help its due today:(

Answer 5

okay im doing it about landfills hmmmm but what do I write them about like hmmmm

Answer 6

ok what kind of essay is it. fictional narrative?

Answer 7

or what.

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idk it just said let me copy it hang on

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You are interested in volunteering during the summer as a dog walker at a local shelter for dogs. Write a letter explaining why you would be an excellent choice for the job. Be sure to include a beginning, middle, and an ending. that's one essay and ill also due landfills so let me do that first one first sence its due first kay so can you please help me?

Answer 10

oh hmm..... 1 sec. go to twiddla

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ummm give me the link

Answer 12

ok. http://www.twiddla.com/1549374

Answer 13

okay and then can you help

Answer 14

yes

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wait. i gtg to the library. go to twiddla ans write it i will be back soon

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idk so I have to write about
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bbcream14






Medals 1 You are interested in volunteering during the summer as a dog walker at a local shelter for dogs. Write a letter explaining why you would be an excellent choice for the job. Be sure to include a beginning, middle, and an ending.

Answer 17

@ElvenBlackout can you help me please

Answer 18

okay so far I got
Dear Bob,
than idk what to put can you help me please????

Answer 19

Introduction

The introduction is the first paragraph in your essay, and it should accomplish a few specific goals.

1. Capture the reader's interest.

It's a good idea to start your essay with a really interesting statement, in order to pique the reader's interest.

Avoid starting out with a boring line like this:

"In this essay I will explain why Rosa Parks was an important figure."

Instead, try something with a bit of a surprise factor, like this statement:

"A Michigan museum recently paid $492,000 for an old, dilapidated bus from Montgomery, Alabama."

The second sentence sounds much more interesting, doesn't it? It would encourage most people to keep on reading.

2. Introduce the topic.

The next few sentences should explain your first statement, and prepare the reader for your thesis statement.

"The old yellow bus was reported to be the very one that sparked the civil rights movement, when a young woman named Rosa Parks..."

3. Make a claim or express your opinion in a thesis sentence.
At the end of your introductory paragraph, you will place a powerful thesis statement. Your thesis sentence should provide your specific assertion and convey a clear point of view.

"In refusing to surrender her seat to a white man, Rosa Parks inspired a courageous freedom movement that lives on, even today."

Your intructor will be looking for the specific elements above when reviewing your introductory paragraph, so be sure to review your first paragraph to make sure it meets these three goals.



Body

The body of the essay will include three paragraphs (if this is a five-paragraph essay), each limited to one main idea that supports your thesis. You should state your idea, then back it up with two or three sentences of evidence or examples.

Example of a main idea:

"It took incredible courage for an African American woman to make such a bold stance in 1955 Alabama."

Offer evidence to support this statement:

"This act took place in an era when African Americans could be arrested and face severe retribution for comitting the most trivial acts of defiance."

Include a few more supporting statements with further evidence, then use transition words to lead to the paragraph that follows. All of your body paragraphs should follow the pattern of statement, supporting ideas, and transition statement.
The fifth paragraph of your five-paragraph essay will be your conclusion.


Conclusion

The final paragraph will summarize your main points and re-assert your main claim (from your thesis sentence). It should point out your main points, but should not repeat specific examples.

Once you complete the first draft of your essay, it's a good idea to re-visit the thesis statement in your first paragraph. Read your essay to see if it flows well.

You might find that the supporting paragraphs are strong, but they don't address the exact focus of your thesis. Simply re-write your thesis sentence to fit your body and summary more exactly.

By doing this, you will ensure that every sentence in your essay supports, proves, or reflects your thesis. Your instructor will be looking for this!

Answer 20

Hope that help !

Answer 21

yes it does thank you so so so so so muck @ElizabethS

Answer 22

Your welcome sweetie =')

Answer 23

you sound like your older are you still in school???

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No I'm not !

Answer 25

oh I am still in school:)(:

Answer 26

Oh, which grade ?

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7th

Answer 28

Wow !

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yeah I still got ways to go:/

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yup you certainly do =) Well good luck on your essay !

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thanks:)(:

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lol @bbcream14 i saw what u said first. dear bob,
i dont know what to say. please help me. (and i am in the class connect)

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(i cant use face cam today. mom said. srry)

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its okay and sorry I was in study island had to turn two things in and now im done with thta

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today i will sing if u get on the class connect.

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okay but I need to do some work but it wont let me in my OLS

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yea and im done with that and now I just got back into school

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i can help with ur school