“As a Junior, I am beginning to think about what type of career I want for my future.” I will not have to do college. It would be part time jobs where I am earning $7.70 per hour. My goals before my job are not planned yet. Some of the goals I want are as follows. First I want to be able to be the best I can be.
Job 1 is a fast food restaurant like Mc. Donalds. Where I would be serving food at a quick speed. I would also be running the cash register. Along with taking orders throughout the day. Most of these people work 40 hours per a day. Yet they get paid a very small amount for the work
Some differences about job 2 are as follows. One being that the hours are more flexible. The wages remain the same Every day. For this job you need to complete short-term-on-the-job training. At this point I am more willing to be a fast food cook than a short-order cook. I think I would get more money than most people. I would get minimum wage and tips from many people. Plus I would get opportunities that other people in other careers would not.
Ok my question
What can I add to make this better?
I ask because my teacher says I need to have 8-10 sentences per paragraph
well job two is better because job 1 is fast food and you mention tips well at fast food their are not many tips. Being a waiter at a restaurant that is where all the tips are at. And I do not understand what u mean by paragraphs.
Are you supposed to write a paper on which you would choose and why or what?
yes and need help
That's what I have now
Well you should explain your opportunities. Have at least 3 and explain them.
thats all I have. p.s I think you choose the hard one. good luck
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