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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Our football coach gathered us together and told us to run laps, and then he made us lift weights, and then he said we had to scrimmage. Which revision corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence? A. Our football coach gathered us together to run laps, and then we lifted weights, and then we scrimmaged. B. Our football coach gathered us together. He told us to run laps, lift weights, and then scrimmage. C. Our football coach gathered us together and said to run laps and lift weights, and then said to scrimmage.

OpenStudy (obeysoph▲):

b looks right

OpenStudy (the_fizicx99):

B ^-^

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you all for all your responses..... it has helped alot.... =)

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