Question

HELP PLEASE

Answer 1

The world is getting worse and worse every day. No one wants to do anything about it. What if someone did then we can clean up the earth and it can be a much better place to live in. The trash under the ground is making it harder for us to breath.
The world today is getting worse because in the landfills all they do is bary the trash. Barying the trash is making the earth die off slowly. Also when people bary the trash it pollutes the earth. The world would be better if we all reuse trash, if i had the power i would get red of landfill and make people recycle. If people did that then the world would have fresh air and clean cites.

Answer 2

thats what i got so far

Answer 3

@MelissaHolmes

Answer 4

do you want me to check the grammar or correctness of facts...?

Answer 5

yes please

Answer 6

ok, at the end of the first paragraph, the word is "breathe" you left out the e. Bary is actually bury. red is rid.... these are probably just small typos.
Otherwise, the facts are good, and it seems very well written. Good Job! :D

Answer 7

thanks:)(:

Answer 8

@yenifer104 @HelpBlahBlahBlah

Answer 9

can you help me on my essay?

Answer 10

The world is getting worse. No one wants to do anything about it. What if someone did then we can clean up the earth and it can be a much better place to live in. The trash under the ground is making it harder for us to breath.

The world today is getting worse because in the landfills all they do is bury the trash. Burying the trash is making the earth die off slowly. Also when people bury the trash it pollutes the earth. The world would be better if we all reuse trash, if I had the power I would get red of landfill and make people recycle. If people did that then the world would have fresh air and clean cites.

If people start recycling then it would help us breathe easier. Recycling would help the planet because the planet would live longer and the underground would not be full of garbage.



this is what i got so far

Answer 11

HELP @Whitemonsterbunny17 @whpalmer4 @johnson0105 @KimberlyAlice @lil_bit @AntiNode @emicase @EmilyBoyce @missbrightside15

Answer 12

okay i need help this is what i got so far


The world is getting worse. No one wants to do anything about it. What if someone did then we can clean up the earth and it can be a much better place to live in. The trash under the ground is making it harder for us to breath.
The world today is getting worse because in the landfills all they do is bury the trash. Burying the trash is making the earth die off slowly. Also when people bury the trash it pollutes the earth. The world would be better if we all reuse trash, if I had the power I would get red of landfill and make people recycle. If people did that then the world would have fresh air and clean cites.
If people start recycling then it would help us breathe easier. Recycling would help the planet because the planet would live longer and the underground would not be full of garbage. If we get all the trash and do something else with it then the earth would live longer and it would help us breathe.
When we recycle less energy is needed to generate new materials. The world would be better if we reuse trash because if we just bury trash it makes the earth slowly die and it makes it harder for us to breathe.

Answer 13

you need a comma after did.
breathe*
need a comma after Also
maybe you could put in some kind of anecdote in your paragraph about how you've seen things getting polluted
same thing about recycling. make up something about how your family recycles and how you've seen an improvement in your household and imagine if everyone was doing that how much better things would get.
give specific types of recycling
you mentioned that you would get people to recycle. how would you encourage that?
fix this stuff and let me know how it goes

Answer 14

question mark after did. not a comma

Answer 15

okay thanks so much @johnson0105

Answer 16

make sure you capitalize Then after you do that
and tell us how the world gets polluted from the buried trash. how/ what does it effect
and fix some minor spelling :}

Answer 17

thanks so much:)(:

Answer 18

I keep finding more.. lol if you can, explain how the trash that you said can be reintegrated/ reused can be made into something else.

Answer 19

well it can cuz if you think about it mostly all the trash can be used for some thing

Answer 20

okay, then tell me what it can be used for

Answer 21

well you can use it for making a project or if you need some thing then ya have it:)(:

Answer 22

exactly. its good to always give examples to the information that you provide.

Answer 23

yes and sorry i took so long i was doing some thing cuz im a little behind in school

Answer 24

well ill be back on latter to finish this okay:)(:

Answer 25

same here, I do online school so im on here a lot.

Answer 26

yeah me to i do k12

Answer 27

yeah well ill be on here latter so i can do my work right now okay cuz i still got history and science to do:(

Answer 28

bye