She takes your breath,
Because she is charming like a dove.
She gives you all she can give till death,
That is when she is taken above.
You think every night,
When it is your time you don't give a fight.
You are now the dove,
Flying so high up above.

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She takes your breath,
Because she is charming like a dove.
She gives you all she can give till death,
That is when she is taken above.
You think every night,
When it is your time you don't give a fight.
You are now the dove,
Flying so high up above.

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

I love this so much PJ<3

anonymous · Answer

its about a good friend that lost his mom in a car accident

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

Aww, I think it's beautiful, and very touching!! c:

anonymous · Answer

aww im really sorry for your friend<3

anonymous · Answer

thank you @Whitemonsterbunny17 @asatt32

anonymous · Answer

no problem love

anonymous · Answer

@madeline.grey @Madison7874 @missbrightside15 @Garcia_Leighton @Preetha @radar @SyedaLovesPie @AntiNode @ElizabethS

anonymous · Answer

thats awesome

anonymous · Answer

Omg, This is beautifully written. I love poems so much. Thank you for tagging me(:

anonymous · Answer

thank you you @madeline.grey for your comment and thank you for your comment as well @SyedaLovesPie

anonymous · Answer

That poem is really nice...good job!@Marco,Phillip

anonymous · Answer

thank you

anonymous · Answer

Awwwww

anonymous · Answer

Awwwww

anonymous · Answer

Love it (:

snowcrystal · Answer

Awwwww i love it Pj <3 it is very touching

anonymous · Answer

This is amazing and you always know how to reach to the bottom of your heart to make small words mean so much to a person.

elizabeths · Answer

Beautiful Poem @Marco,Phillip it just grabs me and I want to read it again and again ! It is actually so well written =') your poem has the achievement of "beauty and delicacy".  
Thanks for sharing !!!

anonymous · Answer

thank you much @ElizabethS for your comment, it was very touching

anonymous · Answer

@SarahEZZMcK

sarahezzmck · Answer

it reminds me of my mom

anonymous · Answer

@girlover

girlover · Answer

Aww that's so sad but sweet

anonymous · Answer

@tanya123

anonymous · Answer

@Maria195

anonymous · Answer

:D:D:D I love this so much! Such a beautiful poem. Good job Jamie :)

anonymous · Answer

lol thank you but i didnt write this one @Marco,Phillip did

anonymous · Answer

Oh. :o Well, good job @Marco,Phillip

tanya123 · Answer

@Marco,Phillip It's a very beautiful, exquisite and Lovely Poem !!!! you've wrote as Gracefully as a huge Masterpiece =) Thank you for Sharing !

anonymous · Answer

thank you guys so much

anonymous · Answer

ur welcome :D Please make more poems! I enjoy reading them. :)

anonymous · Answer

lol i will and i am glad to know that you enjoy reading as i enjoy writing them

anonymous · Answer

^o^ Can't wait to see 'em!

anonymous · Answer

well i will be travaling from West Virginia to Florida on tuesday so i will have plenty of time to think about my next one

anonymous · Answer

:O Oh cool! Have fun! :D

anonymous · Answer

thanks

anonymous · Answer

np. c: