Question 1 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

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Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

A longer phrase was converted to a single word.

A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.

Redundant phrases were eliminated.

Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.
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Question 1 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence? 

 A longer phrase was converted to a single word. 

 A modifier that did not add meaning was removed. 

 Redundant phrases were eliminated. 

 Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns. 
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anonymous · Answer

c  Redundant phrases were eliminated.

therealmeeeee · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

thanks for themedal