Question

So i wrote this song tell me if it is good

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh you know I never felt this way before so i thought i would give it a try and then you left me hear to cry i wish you you you would have loved me like i loved you but all you ever want way for me to be true that all i ever want from you all the things you told me where lies why does that surprise me any way i never should have said yes to you anyways. that all i have right now it is not the best it will get better

Answer 1

@ElisaNeedsHelp

Answer 2

Im flattered you tagged me first :) I think its good becuz it speaks out your true feelings and thats the message you want to portray. And in the "y dose" part it is correctly spelled as "why does". Thats the only correction you need to make. I hope you can write a happy song when you are feeling better :)

Answer 3

kay thanks @ElisaNeedsHelp

Answer 4

@beccaboo333

Answer 5

It's good, it just seemed odd that as soon as I googled it (have to in order to make sure it's legit) this popped up http://www.karlabonoff.com/karlaBonoffLyrics.html

I couldn't really find it, but they could be hidden somewhere. Either way, these lyrics are really good c:

Answer 6

i dont know why but ok that i the way i feel i was just trying to right it into a song

Answer 7

that is only part of it thou

Answer 8

I understand that. It's nothing against what you wrote. It's just to make sure users aren't claiming others work as their own. But like I said, you did really well so far. I'm excited to see the rest c: Maybe I can help you come up with some form of a beat to go along with it.

Answer 9

kay that be a good idea and thanks becca

Answer 10

@shanerocks and @Edward_Elric

Answer 11

I like it michaelae in fact I luv it

Answer 12

YAYA that is only part of it i am still working on it

Answer 13

well it will be awesome when u r done

Answer 14

but it is also my feelings so yeah

Answer 15

@FatboyMatrix

Answer 16

your that upset with me? really

Answer 17

shane it is not about you it is about my feeling so yeah before you say something u should have read it

Answer 18

ik i told u tht so y u gonna say tht HA HA HA HA HA U MAD OR NAW

Answer 19

no y would i be mad actually i am really happy now

Answer 20

@Vallarylynn16

Answer 21

I like it, from reading the comments I can't wait to read the rest and maybe hear it ^.^

Answer 22

OMG love. But just finish it!

Answer 23

I love it.

Answer 24

thanks =-)

Answer 25

It's awesome I can't wait to see more of your work cuz it's awesome!

Answer 26

thanks @Megan1313

Answer 27

@vlltimelow

Answer 28

ITS PERFECT M8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 29

@sexy24/7

Answer 30

it's a good song, but ... I think it's a bit banal. Songs like this in the world thousands. It's cool that you can express your emotions, feelings, thoughts through songs, but in my opinion this song lacks a little variety. sorry if offended you :)

Answer 31

it dose not thanks for the feedback =)

Answer 32

sorry, what?

Answer 33

i am not offended thank for telling me what you think off it =)

Answer 34

I like it but it really just depends on how you did the beat

Answer 35

wow thats good

Answer 36

thank you @Fallen_Angel♥

Answer 37

@Death,The,Girl

Answer 38

it is a good song winry

Answer 39

thanks @Death,The,Girl

Answer 40

this is stupid stop cominting on it tierd of getting notifications on this

Answer 41

well u should not have commented on it then