Question

So I wrote this while I was half delusional and on bed rest. I'll most likely change it around, make it smoother, but what do you think?

Can you hear it?
Can you feel it?
It's boiling inside you
What's boiling? What's brewing in my blood?
What is this need for redemption?
What is this need, this wanting for justice?
Too many demands
Too many questions unanswered

Answer 1

cool

Answer 2

Yeah, it's not my best and it most definitely isn't finished....

Answer 3

its good

Answer 4

it is really good @Mchilds15

Answer 5

Thank you :)

Answer 6

your welcome

Answer 7

amazeballz

Answer 8

Oh stop, you'll make me blush c; @justnick09

Answer 9

It is beautiful Mica.

Answer 10

Excellent

Answer 11

I love it... it must be finished ^.^

Answer 12

OMG it sound so majestic!!! Finish it please!!!!

Answer 13

Thanks guys! Means a lot <3333

Answer 14

Very good c:

Answer 15

amazing m8<3

Answer 16

i really like it its awesome :3